suno
Nardi
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Tags:
toki pona, pop
The chart has a clear set of ideas that are executed fairly well, it's just the ideas here aren't very good. The patterning is very hindered by the amount of LNs there are, and it becomes very awkward and unpleasant to look at and play. You could remedy this by making the LNs during the choruses not as long or just removing most of them entirely. Other than that the chart is fine I guess
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There needs to be some kind of flow added to the stream sections 16127|2, 64127|2, and 144127|1. The idea of a sort of dump to the vocals of the song is there but it ends up muttered since there isn't really any structure to it. Mapping it with more mind to the vocal representation would do some good.
I have just put this mapset on hold, which means that minor issues have been found in the mapset and we are waiting for a fix with a map update. Please fix the listed errors and update the mapset.
I won't be able to update this till i can get my client back online, please bare with me.
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