'Unholy' chordjacks aren't mapped to anything interesting, seems to end arbitrarily, the map also seems to sacrifice a lot of representation (ex. 106307 where most of the vocal is ignored), chord sizes also inconsistent especially on the slower parts of the song
'Unforgivable' same thing, but the streams literally end more random than cj diff, and placed really unfitting to the song, similar issues also apply to this diff
I'm gonna press the unholy deny button now
I have just denied this mapset from being ranked. Please fix the listed errors and resubmit in 2 weeks.
I have just re-submitted my mapset for rank!
Unforgivable: The way you go about layering in this chart is pretty flawed. Having your chord focus be on the instrumental can be passable when you execute it properly and it fits the song but the way it's done here doesn't compliment the song and you'd be better off charting jumps/hands to vowels. That being said a lot of vocal holds aren't even charted and the streams only being on one high snap throughout the entire song could work if there was more variance to the streams but there simply isn't so it falls flat
Unholy: The chord density in this difficulty is confusingly awkward in a lot of places. It's yet again another issue of following the instrumental more than the vocals when most of the map is based around the charting of those vocals. Having hands be on vocals sometimes and then other times leaving gaps for the instrumental just doesn't make sense and it makes the structure of the chart very messy
With that being said, I'd strongly advise you to just rework these difficulties from the ground up with more attention given to the vocals, and only focusing on the instrumental when you absolutely have to