I can appreciate the map having a concept and I think you do a fair job at representing the song with svs, but I couldn't help but notice some inconsistencies with the map that I feel like needs to be brought up and evaluated before going for ranked.
For example, this 42497|1,42497|2,42497|3, is a triple. Though it isn't clear why it is a triple, and it seems to be randomly placed.
When planning how your map will structure, try planning how you want the section to be, how should the vocals, beat and melody be represented? When you figure out how to represent those, try doing so across the map, it will help with consistency as you should have a clear idea on how you want to represent the song.
I have just denied this mapset from being ranked. Please fix the listed errors and resubmit in 2 weeks.