This map has ideas that I can get behind, but they aren't executed very well. For example I really like the idea on 72964|1 for top diff along with the sv, but then it's followed by sections like between 39964 and 42490 where it doesn't follow the instruments very well for the main melody, and the rolls not following the drums very well either. Checking through and maybe focusing more on separating out the representation for the instruments, and having a more repetitive structure for reoccurring sounds throughout the map would help make this map a little bit better.
Thanks for reaching out!
I have just checked your suggestion and made a few changes to the arrangements of sections 22991 to 32939 and similar. I also made significant changes to sections like 39964 to 42490.
Resubmitted.
This map has ideas that I can get behind, but they aren't executed very well. For example I really like the idea on 72964|1 for top diff along with the sv, but then it's followed by sections like between 39964 and 42490 where it doesn't follow the instruments very well for the main melody, and the rolls not following the drums very well either. Checking through and maybe focusing more on separating out the representation for the instruments, and having a more repetitive structure for reoccurring sounds throughout the map would help make this map a little bit better.
I have just denied this mapset from being ranked. Please fix the listed errors and resubmit in 2 weeks.
Thanks for reaching out! I have just checked your suggestion and made a few changes to the arrangements of sections 22991 to 32939 and similar. I also made significant changes to sections like 39964 to 42490. Resubmitted.
I have just re-submitted my mapset for rank!