This section's patterning is a bit cluttered and confusing, like the jumptrill at 58503|1,58503|2,58625|3,58625|4,58747|1,58747|2 seems really out of place. I'd say go back and listen carefully to better represent the song, as well as make this section a bit more consistent.
Move this down to 108748 for sync.
These hands are really arbitrary, maybe make them single LNs or something similar.
This section's patterning is a bit cluttered and confusing, like the jumptrill at 58503|1,58503|2,58625|3,58625|4,58747|1,58747|2 seems really out of place. I'd say go back and listen carefully to better represent the song, as well as make this section a bit more consistent.
This hand and similar instances should be changed to jumps for consistency. The LNs can stay, just remove a normal note and you'll be fine.
This pattern is very unappealing and every jump should be on 1/2. Maybe try to avoid anchoring on column 2 as it isn't needed.
Move this jump to 12040 for sync.