VIOLET

Ninomae Ina'nis

A proper offset for the song needs be be placed and not left at 0. Because of this, notes dont line up with the music and rhythms are incorrect. Nuances in the rhythm are missed and notes are misplaced.

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While no longer 0, the BPM placement is still incorrect. The first BPM does not need to be placed so far before the song starts. While its almost lines up the Snaps are completely wrong landing a whole 1/2 off where it should be. A time of `1496` is more accurate for the first timing point. Notes are being placed much earlier than they are in the song. If you need to offset everything by 1/16, either your notes or BPM is wrong. Please make sure while slowing down the song the "Pitch Audio With Playback Rate" option is turned on. Otherwise notes will sound earlier/later than they actually are in the song. In general i feel the chart itself tries to focus too hard on the vocals. many places in the song feel like they are lacking in notes. for example at 65482 you have this strong kick on every beat, but it is nowhere in the chart despite being the main focus of the song. Other times you have a soft vocal section, and it will be charted just as much as the grand chorus of the song. The only time anything else is charted is when there aren't any vocals in the song. Try to focus on the song as a whole and match the intensity of the chart to the intensity of the song.

I have just denied this mapset from being ranked. Please fix the listed errors and resubmit in 2 weeks.