Perseus

Yamazaru

very unjustifiably awkward and arbitrary jack structuring feel more than just uncalled for. the chorus has extremely dense general jack structuring which makes way for wildly difficult and odd symmetrical patterning during some choice vocal phrases which feels a bit out of place in the context of the patterns around it which are more general and dont rely on the song much. map opts for longjacks during the calm sections for every vocal, which could work but it wasnt executed well as the column placements feel very arbitrary and often form really unreasonably awkward phrases. map overall is very messy with how it goes about representing the vocals with the jack structuring.

I have just denied this mapset from being ranked. Please fix the listed errors and resubmit in 2 weeks.

tragic