Reach for the Moon, Immortal Smoke
ZUN
Source:
Touhou 8: Imperishable Night
Tags:
Touhou, BGM, VGM
The map is very inconsistent and would need a lot of working on in my opinion. The patterns are also very arbitrary and I don't think a lot of people would enjoy playing some of the patterns since there could be a lot of stuff done to some of the sections in the song, but you decide to make them just stairs and a few minijacks here and there.
I have just denied this mapset from being ranked. Please fix the listed errors and resubmit in 2 weeks.
I have just re-submitted my mapset for rank!
Same issue as my deny message from earlier. The patterns are still not as interesting as it was before and placement is very inconsistent, and the minijacks just feel weird. I recommend joining the Quaver Discord server and hang out there, there are a lot of mappers/players willing to help you improve with mapping and this mapset.
I have just denied this mapset from being ranked. Please fix the listed errors and resubmit in 2 weeks.