Some of the ideas explored in this map aren't executed very well, like the minijacks during 65675 don't necessarily follow any set rule or sound, making them pretty unnecessary overall. There are some layering issues here and there as well, like this quad at 12342, or the buildup at 20342. Consistency wise these moments don't make much sense. I'd suggest going back through the map to restructure some of the patterns so that they can represent the music better.
Some of the ideas explored in this map aren't executed very well, like the minijacks during 65675 don't necessarily follow any set rule or sound, making them pretty unnecessary overall. There are some layering issues here and there as well, like this quad at 12342, or the buildup at 20342. Consistency wise these moments don't make much sense. I'd suggest going back through the map to restructure some of the patterns so that they can represent the music better.
I have just denied this mapset from being ranked. Please fix the listed errors and resubmit in 2 weeks.