Moon Gate

Shiraishi

Offset is off by about ~27ms (107) Overall isn't the worst map, although, the top diff has a lot of really misrepresented sounds and a lot of inconsistencies (especially 35374). The lower diff is overall fine, but still suffers the same issues as the top diff. I encourage you to keep polishing this map and I hope to see it in the queue soon :) (Also please change the audio :sob: 93256)

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Remove bms, Shiraishi, and moon gate from the tags, leave the source field blank The jack patterns still feel very inconsistent across both difficulties, for example, 22695 in the "Unlocked" difficulty isn't very consistent in structure in comparison to the section just before it, and I believe there are missing notes in there as well. 57989 in the "Unlocked" difficulty also changes up the structure in a way that makes it hard to follow what it's trying to represent in the song and could benefit from having similar patterning as shown in previous sections. 94695 While the structure change here in the "Unlocked" difficulty again is justifiable its density is still fairly inconsistent with the rest of the chart. These issues are examples and can be found in both difficulties all throughout both charts. With enough changes this could be an interesting jack file, but for the time being there needs to be a lot of reworks

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