Drowning

IceyDuNoir

Change the source to something along the lines of "Friday Night Funkin' Dusttale Original Soundtrack", remove "Dusttale" and "Icey" from the tags and add "Electronic".

I have just put this mapset on hold, which means that minor issues have been found in the mapset and we are waiting for a fix with a map update. Please fix the listed errors and update the mapset.

The tags haven't changed since the last time I put the set on hold

I have just put this mapset on hold, which means that minor issues have been found in the mapset and we are waiting for a fix with a map update. Please fix the listed errors and update the mapset.

Apologies for that. I'm relatively new to charting and didnt really know these comments existed until a few days ago.

why has this been resolved for 3 months

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I have just put this mapset on hold, which means that minor issues have been found in the mapset and we are waiting for a fix with a map update. Please fix the listed errors and update the mapset.

before I start the quality of the mapset overall is a bit poor because the chart lacks a lot of structure needed for a song like this with very straight forward rhythms and vocals, also the layering is a bit overdone at times especially in the Cold difficulty for the intensity of the song, lessening the impact later on (you can see this first-hand with the hand usage between 1859 to 15705 for the piano). only left timestamps and mods for "Cold" difficulty: 19397|2,19397|4 cowbell in the intro probably doesn't deserve the same density as the bass drum/weird sample (19282|1,19282|3). main issue with the chart is the stream patterning and usage for the beeping vocals at 31398 onwards, there's a clear shift in tone/pitch but you just continue repeating the same pattern in the first stream which results in an odd experience to play and doesn't reflect the song well and also just feels bad to play in general, i would opt for a direction change at the 1/1 at 31859 or at least a decent change in patterning from the first roll. 35436|2,35493|3,35551|4,35551|1 and 37282|2,37397|1,37397|4 should be the same essentially as it follows the same vocal line and drum fills but they're not, and we have a repetition of the opening stream at 38782 which you already know i'm not a fan of, the stream patterning throughout the more i look at it is just super rolly and uninteresting, with a focus possibly on trying to make it as easy as possible instead of trying to represent the song but fails do that also because of the hand usage which was placed for consistency but clearly the thought of playability on top of that was ignored. the entire next section at 44321 is just copy pasted and mirrored which is fine but i would've liked at least some changes in patterning or anything since this is the main substance of the chart.

section at 75705 is super underwhelming for the intensity of the music especially when compared to the first chorus which is essentially the exact same intensity instrumentally but with less focus on the vocals, might be better to try and bring it in line with all of 33244 onwards to 60936. overall the chart has a lot of mistakes and not adequate representation of the song especially the section i just mentioned at 75705. the stream patterning doesn't feel great to play and should have some changes made to improve that experience while also reflecting the song a bit better, the layering in the intro is overdone when compared to the chorus and probably should have the density checked since there are some inconsistencies with the hands for the piano/bell whatever (these ones like 35089|4,35089|2,35089|1,36936|4,36936|3,36936|1,37859|2,37859|3,37859|4) that probably should be fixed up to continue the emphasis on that. hope this helps somehow

I have just denied this mapset from being ranked. Please fix the listed errors and resubmit in 2 weeks.

damn my feelings are hurt im never mapping ever again. im obviously kidding.. I appreciate the reality check honestly, because this was just a mistake on my end to upload a mapset that was piss poor to begin with, though i have improved a lot since the first version of this set. Before my last update to the map set, it was kinda poor and i just wanted to improve on it, but i was honestly lazy and just wanted to get this mapset out of the way so i rushed through updating it, which ended up with just a ton of copy pasted patterns. I do understand most of the points made here, and when i will try my best to improve on them. however I believe the chord you mentioned at 19397 is a misunderstanding. That chord mentioned is meant to represent the piano/bell bit right after the bass sample is played, not the cowbell mentioned, i just prefer to have left it has a chord, and not a hand. Though if it is a problem, i can try to work around it. Also, im left confused on what you mean when it comes to the hands being "inconsistent". The only thing i can interpret from that is that there's too many hands? I can maybe see the start of the track being littered with hands, but the main substance of the chart is what i dont really understand, as i feel like its still pretty playable even with the hands. However if i dont actually have the choice but to remove the hands, and risk making the difficulty easier, then i'll see what i can do.

and the 75705 section mentioned is a little underwhelming like you say, but honestly im not too sure how i can improve on that. The only way i can see this bit being improved is by putting chords all over, which is something ive already done but removed it because i thought it was unnecessary. Though i'll see what i can do with this. The obvious roll patterns you mentioned i can definitely improve, because this was one of the patterns i just rushed through. When i can find the time to, ill definitely sit down to fix everything up. Time isnt really something i just casually have, as im in highschool currently, and the pure fact that i have to update the whole mapset again for the is not something im excited about, but again, ill see what i can do. (p.s. im not sure how to properly arrange comments, so all sentence are just kinda mushed together)

I have just re-submitted my mapset for rank!

took a long break from this game, came back to re-chart this whole mapset, and hopefully it suffices, as i took proper time to look over the patterns, and make them more consistent.