lagtrain (bootleg remix)
kurokotei
Source:
n/a
Tags:
lagtrain,kurokotei,breakcore,speedcore
Title should be "Lag Train (Black Emperor Bootleg)" capitalise the artist name and remove their name from tags as it's already in the artist field. This chart has practically no accurate representation to the song with almost everything being on the wrong snap, offset is incorrect and should be moved up by 41ms (edit > apply offset > type in 41), then you're going to need to adjust all the notes timings/replace them on the correct snap to make sure they're synced. Also remove all the extra timing points added for artificial "drift" made by the wrong initial offset. Notes feel sporadically placed and a lot of the chords/notes are on the wrong snap with sections like 103812 with chords such as 107534|3,107534|4,107867|2,107867|1,108200|2,108200|3 on the wrong snap (should be on the 1/1 below). I can see some of your ideas in some sections but they're incredibly mumbled and messy such as 34722|1,34722|2,34722|4,34888|4,34888|2,34888|1 but the following sections hardly even reflect the song at all. To start off try accurately representing the sounds in the song first and then you can experiment with dump charting once you fully understand that concept.
I have just denied this mapset from being ranked. Please fix the listed errors and resubmit in 2 weeks.
Correction; Title should be "Lag Train (Kurokotei Bootleg)"