Young Girl A

siinamtoa

Put "J-Pop"/"jpop" in tags as the required genre, and change the source to Overall the chart has some really neat concepts and cool sections taking the intro as an example, but there's quite a few consistency issues mainly with missnapping of notes (5363|2,5363|4,5363|1, 6459|1,6517|2,6574|3,6632|4 completely on the wrong snap and should start at 6287, 6632|4 should end at the 1/1). there's a lot of questionable sections also in terms of representation though such as 22210 focusing entirely on percussion and only the snare / hi hat and not layering the kicks. the chorus also suffers from these missnaps like 67786|1,67786|2,67786|4 off by 1/4 unless this is for focusing the percussion, but the fact your layering here is not clear is a bad sign. also inconsistent layering of the vocals 67902|4,67902|3 compared to 68363|2,68363|3,68363|4, 136209|2 compared to 135748|1,135748|2,135748|3 which could be done for emphasis but i'm unsure that is the case. also all of these sections like 186518,73902 etc are quite undercharted compared to the rest of the chorus, also inconsistently charted compared to similar sections like 88671. overall this has too many issues to be modded or to be rankable in its current state unfortunately

do not change the source, i forgot to delete that part. But if you want, it could be changed to the english title "Alive".

I have just denied this mapset from being ranked. Please fix the listed errors and resubmit in 2 weeks.

also do not use the background as the banner