The Red Coronation

EYE RH

Add "Electronic, Piano" to the tags and remove "deemo" The way you dump in this chart doesn't flow very well, being dense with no sense of direction and not following any cohesive rule as to when you start dumping. Along with the awkward choice of dumping you tend to change the structure of patterning without much reason either, like at 20398 you start charting the instrumental as jacks, but following shortly after at 23515 you dumb down the layering and make it half-baked jumpstream. Even with both of those major issues you also have just, really awkward playing patterns like during the last drop of the chart at 110787, it just isn't fun to play and is very lacking in representation. Overall the approach you've taken could work given you dump more comfortably and consistently and follow more comprehensible rules. Be sure that your layering is consistent as well

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The dump was removed and I use handstream to fit the music

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The chart still has issues with chord density and consistency, as well as when you choose to change the snap and dump notes. Generally the way you chart hands still feels very arbitrary and without much structure in mind, like the section at 39099 and even in the beginning at 7930 there are odd choices in hand placement. The consistency with how you dump is also very odd when you change the snap on certain noises that appear more than once but you don't consistently do that, making the chart messier and more disjointed. I suggest you go back through the chart again and plan out your chord structure better so that it fits with the song's intensity and how the song plays.

I have just denied this mapset from being ranked. Please fix the listed errors and resubmit in 2 weeks.