Like We're Dying

Atef

youtube links are not a valid source, if the song isn't featured in a game or album then you should leave the source field blank long note lengths in the intro do not correlate with the vocals in some places (see 15341|4,20312|2), some filler notes in the section at 33170 would be appreciated as the ln synth gets a bit awkward when there's large gaps of notes. 49627 this glut pattern creates a super long anchor on column 2, i would consider mirroring the pattern to the other hand to balance it out or changing the pattern entirely chorus patterning is literally the exact same pattern repeated despite song changes in the next part of the chorus at 65913, would've liked something a bit harder by layering in jumps or making it more trilly etc. usage of chords in the post chorus is odd and not consistent, same with the intro but it's much more noticeable with a steady bassline here. 153684 is just so lazy again to keep the ever unchanging patterns with numerous differences in each section of the song here even with vocals, it also doesn't really fit in a lot of places like 162255 could transition into something lighter for when the vocals come in as there's a clear shift. unfortunately i don't think this chart really is of rankable standards so i'll be denying it for now

I have just denied this mapset from being ranked. Please fix the listed errors and resubmit in 2 weeks.