So Damn Tough feat. VG

Crazy Astronaut

no tags, apply +18ms offset using edit > apply offset to map. a lot of the song variation is dumped as dense chordjacks in favour of representing the song, there is some good layering for the synth but all the quads kinda drown out the ability to distinguish it at all, i'd recommend changing up the density a bit to allow for more clear layering. also this section at 233169 the contrast in difficulty between 233169 and 235912 is insane i don't think this sort of stuff should be acceptable 279797 i get the concept of the raising volume, but maybe make this a bit less of a meme :jerry: 170083 patterning here is a bit fucked, be careful with these transitions on the same hand (stuff like 170940|4,170940|3,171026|4,171111|4,171111|3,171197|3,171283|4,171283|3). clearly you have an idea on how to layer sounds in the song but the patterning and structure overall just feels a bit soulless, the chorus has a lack of variation in chords and overall though there is individual hand layering for the melody and wubs/rising stuff it all just kinda blends together as there's literally 0 breaks in density and the best way to distinguish stuff like this without changing your density is your patterning, which feels a bit all over the place in each chordjack section. i'd like to see this back in queue with a bit more refined ideas though i do like the way this has been charted i don't think it really fits the quality bill in it's current state, but it easily could be in future

if it wasn't clear - i want you to add some tags relative to the song and chart (must include genre) thanks

I have just denied this mapset from being ranked. Please fix the listed errors and resubmit in 2 weeks.

im so stupid i completely forgot about quaver's existence, is there any way i can get this going again if i add tags, fix up the map etc?