intro needs a little adjustment, at the start piano is off by 20ms
12288|2 should be on the red line above following vocals
vocal representation in intro could be better
24787|3,24854|1,24921|3 unprecedented dump part here, feels out of place
following drum ticks 25321|4 shouldn't be here
triples are inconsistent, 32968|3,32968|4,32968|2 is for snare but 34368|2,34368|1,34368|4 represents normal drum even though there's a snare sound right after it
63768 should be on 1/6 ticks, also 66968 missed 1/6 ticks here, you should map it since you also mapped 25368 as 1/6 ticks
cj is very anchory (see 127368|1,127568|1,127768|1,127968|1,128168|1,128368|1,128568|1,128768|1,128968|1,129168|1) I think it could be patterned better
108968 focuses on the wrong thing, the vocals are much clearer to hear so probably represent it so it doesn't becomes 1/4 trills only (piano slowly fades out around 115368, so vocal can take over priority)
120168 1/8 stream is kinda rough especially with the minijacks like 120468|2,120568|2, could make it more rolly
intro needs a little adjustment, at the start piano is off by 20ms 12288|2 should be on the red line above following vocals vocal representation in intro could be better 24787|3,24854|1,24921|3 unprecedented dump part here, feels out of place following drum ticks 25321|4 shouldn't be here triples are inconsistent, 32968|3,32968|4,32968|2 is for snare but 34368|2,34368|1,34368|4 represents normal drum even though there's a snare sound right after it 63768 should be on 1/6 ticks, also 66968 missed 1/6 ticks here, you should map it since you also mapped 25368 as 1/6 ticks cj is very anchory (see 127368|1,127568|1,127768|1,127968|1,128168|1,128368|1,128568|1,128768|1,128968|1,129168|1) I think it could be patterned better 108968 focuses on the wrong thing, the vocals are much clearer to hear so probably represent it so it doesn't becomes 1/4 trills only (piano slowly fades out around 115368, so vocal can take over priority) 120168 1/8 stream is kinda rough especially with the minijacks like 120468|2,120568|2, could make it more rolly
add tags and source (if there's one) also fix diff name typo if that's not intentional
I have just denied this mapset from being ranked. Please fix the listed errors and resubmit in 2 weeks.