Some inconsistencies with chord sizes. Just check mods.
I have just put this mapset on hold, which means that minor issues have been found in the mapset and we are waiting for a fix with a map update. Please fix the listed errors and update the mapset.
Recheck the intro, some of the lns are definitely not in line with when the sound actually happens. For example, 36035|4, is more like 36096|3. I don't know if it would be better to make individual timing points on the intro to line up better with the bell sound and vocal shift on the intro.
Make one offset at 42767.34 and another at 385, you can play with it some but that's what I found works. You may need to re snap the notes as well.
I have added +1 vote for this mapset!
Check modding for some timing issues.
52563 - 62359 - your use of chords has incorrect structure for the music. For example you used a hand (52563|7,52563|6,52563|5) to represent the sound but in the next measure the same sound is represented with a double (52930|6,52930|7), this goes on through out the entire section (other examples: 53175|3,53175|5 ; 53420|1,53420|3 ; 55379|2,55379|5 ...).
64685 - simplify this as you did later.
90277|1 - move this note to 2nd lane to remove the anchor.
92910|3, 93277|5, 93644|7, 94012|4 - remove these notes as they dont represent precussion correctly.
94685 - 98604 ; 100563 - 106440 - why not represent the kicks with a double at least.
126645, 127134, 127624 - sound is not represented.
128726|4,128726|6,128848|3 - inverse chord sizes.
136073 - 138400 - could use work on hand balancing.
146726 - 146971 - simplify the pattern here to represent the main melody better.
148685 - 149542 ; 151502 - 152359 - these parts feel very empty.
157379 - the drum is much simpler than what you are doing here.
161665, 165583 - the stream for drum roll is missing
169134, 170604, 172073 - decrease the size of this chord to make space for the stream before it. Like this its too messy.
172073 - 173542 - rather than a continuous stream, change it to be quick bursts for precussion only.
177706|1 - the only time you are using an ln in this section, might as well replace it with a note.