Experiment MK VG (cut ver)

Phyrnna

handstream patterning in the chorus feels incredibly unbalanced and the patterning is very all over the place. be careful with how you place down the streams to not form insane spikes of jacks or hand biased sections that aren't intentional. the layering overall does seem to follow a consistent structure but i think the density usage also don't really match the intensity of the song. 82368 you're layering an insane amount of jumps here creating a massive spike which isn't inherently bad but it doesn't feel good to play because the song doesn't really reflect that energy in any way. 123511 where you start and the stops the bursts here is not consistent and there doesn't seem to be a reason for it. the main issue of the chart is the overall lacking structure with the patterns including the jack patterns, as i already mentioned the density consistency seems ok but you really need to work on the patterns, thats it. can be rankable in future with revisions

the difficulty progression also is quite lacking again with the patterning. just seems to be random minijacks everywhere in the intro though the density build makes sense.

I have just denied this mapset from being ranked. Please fix the listed errors and resubmit in 2 weeks.