it's unreasonable to left kick as double note since it doesn't follow up to 78787 or 79187 , either to add them or remove the triple notes to double (from 79187 to ```81587) to maintain consistency
feels awkward if you left them empty and it's better to maintain the jack part, might add a note in col 1 (don't forget to apply similar part if you resolve this)
these trills might too difficult and a bit awkward since it also holding a ln, i suggest to shorten the ln by 1/2 and move 26987|3 notes to avoid 3 anchors aka 6 note trills, for example;
it doesn't feel right to have built up spike right there, this may not be an issue but it could be better to swap the 1/4 stream (from 8387 to 11387) with 11587 - 13187
simply move a note to avoid these 5 anchor since the rest section only has 3 anchor max
moved note
it's unreasonable to left kick as double note since it doesn't follow up to 78787 or 79187 , either to add them or remove the triple notes to double (from 79187 to ```81587) to maintain consistency
made all double
feels awkward if you left them empty and it's better to maintain the jack part, might add a note in col 1 (don't forget to apply similar part if you resolve this)
added notes
these notes are overemphasized and it takes to long stream part, i highly suggest to remove these 2 notes, might apply at 27587 section too
removed notes
these trills might too difficult and a bit awkward since it also holding a ln, i suggest to shorten the ln by 1/2 and move 26987|3 notes to avoid 3 anchors aka 6 note trills, for example;
changed
i think it's reasonable to make it similar as 21187 (add 1/4 stream) and dont forget to apply to the same part
made consistent
it doesn't feel right to have built up spike right there, this may not be an issue but it could be better to swap the 1/4 stream (from 8387 to 11387) with 11587 - 13187
i fix