10 Things I Hate About You (Sped Up & Cut Ver.)
Leah Kate
Source:
n/a
Tags:
english, pop, pop-punk, punk, alternative, drums, alive, unwell, tiktok, female, vocals, vocalist, nightcore, our secret handshake, anchors, chordjack, jack, jindax, stream, jumpstream
BPM:
176
Length:
1:32
Passes/Fails:
7848 / 2859
why you only put a ln here? like there are also some 1/1 vocal on 91384|3,91725|4,92066|4,92407|1 but you just make them as rice. please be consistent
ive replaced it with an ln
i mean i removed it my bad
from 24566 to 34112 the concept is similar with chorus but they sound different, i don't understand why you didn't represent the drum roll as this sound is the most dominant than the others, it just doesn't feel right. i suggest you to make it light js to express drum roll and dominant kick in every 1/1 since the other diff is dense js
map represented in vocals and i dont see a need of doing so, single streams would ruin the vocal representation
light js would basically be jindax copy
please be consistent with the quads, cuz here she's not counting and no vocal background like 41612
fixed
this seems unreasonable to emphasize vocal as jackhammer because it doesn't applied at 34111|1,34452|2,34793|3,35134|4 while both are similar break part, represent them as single ln is fine enough
fixed
could add more note here, i suggest to add them at col 4
81669 - this part too
fixed
inconsistent density refer to 21839|1,22009|1,22180|1,22350|1,22520|2,22691|2,22861|2,23032|2 and 23884|4,24055|4,24225|4,24395|4 , better to make them to single notes at col 3
fixed
these kind LNs at 3089 - 24566 section are unecessary and applies inconsistency to the anchors, it's better to maintain the current jack pattern and it doesn't feel too awkward to play (example; change the ln 10589|4 to 10589|4,10759|4 rice notes)
49111|1,50645|4 would mind to change this too if you apply the mod
fixed
i have fixed tags btw
drum kick here should be layered as a jump probably
sure if that works thumbsup
move this to another column to keep the intention of the vocal anchor before it
i have moved it thumbsup
probably should make this a jump for the vocal same as 26782|2,26782|1 ?? same with 28486|2,29850|4 but not 32577|1 as the vocal does end a bit earlier
26782|2,26782| was already a double so no need to do anything
27123 is now a double
28486|2,29850| are now doubles
32577|1 is still not a double
all fixed thumbsup
be careful with one handed jacks like this
evaluate
this patterning is cool for pr but it sucks to play and the intention is lost with the jumps at 12294 as the col 1 anchor just continues throughout.
i'd suggest revising it to play a bit better
i think ive fixed it in my opinion
thumbsup
remove the ln and add a note at 7351 this kinda takes me out of the flow, same for all these types of sections where vocal breaks are long notes (10589|4, 15191|4 this one is pretty bad, 17918|1 etc etc).
idk if uve noticed but every ln ive placed is meant to represent every breathe she takes
agree with cuckson here, the concept doesn't really blend well and out of place imo, could be better if you just make it rice + add a note at 7351 and don't make it jack to indicate it as vocal break
okay fixed