Why We Lose (Cut Ver.)
Cartoon feat. Coleman Trapp
Source:
n/a
Tags:
electronic, dnb, ncs, pop, stamina, Shaky (Europe Edition), SubtIr, kissu, kissu8
BPM:
175
Length:
2:45
Passes/Fails:
992 / 3538
I recommend rearranging that slightly. It is too right hand biased and I feel like moving a jack to the left side could make it feel more comfortable.
i rearranged the whole section
This section I feel like should be nerfed a bit. Keep the 1/6 streams but compared to the previous stream area, this feels a bit more underwhelming.
I recommend sorting out trills like 66685|1,66743|3,66800|1 as there are a ton of them in this section which I do not feel like represents anything, meanwhile we have 44057|1,44114|4,44171|1 which actually does.
i removed the unnecessary trills and added trills representing the screams in the background
I recommend deleting that note. The grace seems to be incredibly uncomfortable to play and is just out of place. This includes 63043|3 65786|2 and many more (if they are there)
i changed them to normal jumps instead
In the timestamp I sent above you have little 1/1 jacks for the vocals which consists of two notes then moves to another jack.
For some reason we have a 3 note jack in 28971|1,29314|1,29657|1
88628|3,88971|3,89314|3,89657|3,90000|3 also applies to sections like that. Please try and remain consistent with your structuring.
oh ok sure