this part onwards doesnt seem to follow any specific rules or have much relevance to the music. I think it should be more specific or straightforward than just notes going around randomly
You made this part 35289 dense with doubles every other note but at the actual chorus its just singles notes every 1/2 beat. I think this would be an issue as the density does not follow music intensity
all of the notes here go from one hand to another - for example : 450|1,611|4 I suggest making this also go from left hand to right
this part onwards doesnt seem to follow any specific rules or have much relevance to the music. I think it should be more specific or straightforward than just notes going around randomly
I see that you are doing doubles every other note, but I'm not sure if this deserves all doubles
You made this part 35289 dense with doubles every other note but at the actual chorus its just singles notes every 1/2 beat. I think this would be an issue as the density does not follow music intensity