This whole sections has bass sounds, which I feel is much stronger and interesting than the ticks you mapped the doubles on. I suggest trying to represent those and see if it works for you.
52223|3,52223|4,52304|2,52385|1,52385|4,52385|3,52465|2,52546|1,52546|4,52627|3,52707|1,52707|2,52707|4,52788|3,52869|1,52869|4,52949|2,53030|3,53030|1 These two should look the same imo
this part onwards doesnt seem to follow any specific rules or have much relevance to the music. I think it should be more specific or straightforward than just notes going around randomly
all of the notes here go from one hand to another - for example : 450|1,611|4
I suggest making this also go from left hand to right
[First Stage] -cant delete mods asdf
This looks kinda uncomfortable… 77627 making this just 2 will also work fine. No need to force the jack imo
I see that you are doing doubles every other note, but I'm not sure if this deserves all doubles
oops these are all for [First Stage] my bad. How tf do I delete stuff here
The sound goes from one side to another. I think it would be nice if the jacks actually represented those
add note, missing sound
same as above
repeating vocals, do what you did before in the same part here : 68352|4,68352|2,68433|1,68514|2,68514|3,68594|4 This is very good
This whole sections has bass sounds, which I feel is much stronger and interesting than the ticks you mapped the doubles on. I suggest trying to represent those and see if it works for you.
didnt mean to use issue but whatever
really?? I think it should be more interesting
The vocal calls for a 3-note one-handed trill instead of an anchor here
same as above
52223|3,52223|4,52304|2,52385|1,52385|4,52385|3,52465|2,52546|1,52546|4,52627|3,52707|1,52707|2,52707|4,52788|3,52869|1,52869|4,52949|2,53030|3,53030|1 These two should look the same imo
i make it different
this part onwards doesnt seem to follow any specific rules or have much relevance to the music. I think it should be more specific or straightforward than just notes going around randomly
[First Stage] -cant delete mods asdf
this is literally a copypasta of the pattern from my previous mod, I think this would be a potential issue if it is used without any reasoning.
representing repeating vocals in your streams would be cool, like this : https://snipboard.io/oHrsQq.jpg
add note, missing sound
not sure if this part is intense enough to receive shields. I think it would be better without them