Serpentine (Cut Ver.)

False Noise

any reason that 230926 to 232147 is mapped more densely than 219763 to 220984?

This pattern right here stands out to me to very right hand biased. might wanna rearrange a bit

Pretty sure this should not be a hand since every other case of snare here you have mapped as jump. also the Ln should be extended to the start of the trill to stay consistent with 118425|3

Pretty sure something went wrong with copy-pasting here. there is no jump for snare at 115635. and there is no kick or snare hit at 115809|3,115809|4 so that should be changed

This entire section is kinda weird. its very different from how you usually map this. with jacks. and a jump for the snare. and no trill between the 1st and 2nd ln. shouldn't this just be consistent with 118425|3,118425|2,118687|1,118731|4,118774|1

any reason why 112321 and 112496 are not jumps. it would make sense for consistency with patterns like 70460|2,70460|3,70635|4,70635|2
and just a bit later you do use jumps for 115111|1,115111|2,115286|2,115286|3

Shouldn't this be more similar to 111449|4,111492|3,111507|2 , since the wobs are so similar it doesn't feel right that one pattern is longer and ends later then the other

any reason there is not a note here but there is a note 75606|3, 81187|2 and 86768|2

any reason why 69065 to 69937 and 74647 to 75519 are different in the length certain snaps are used for while they sound the same

Just a small suggestion but maybe move this down to the 1/16th below to have it in the middle of the note before and jump after. could slightly improve flow

Is this representing the snare kick? if so I'm pretty sure that the snare kick plays on 41856 so it would be a missnap

Quite sure this Ln starts to late and should actually start on 14472