Spin Eternally
Camellia
Source:
Beat Saber
Tags:
かめりあ, cametek, kamelcamellia, dubstep, electrohouse, hardcore, breakcore, house, instrumental, ost4, electronic, soundtrack, かめるかめりあ, Original Game Soundtrack, Vol. IV, Hybrid
BPM:
222
Length:
3:45
Passes/Fails:
2036 / 5980
are wrongly snapped. should be snapped on the 1/4th. make sure to make the ln's the same as 210749|1,210749|3,210952|1,210952|3
This should be a jump since every beginning of the synth is a jump, for example the jacks at 170209
the intent of that part is to mix the elements of the start synth (166965|4,167101|1,167236|2,167371|3) and the part before it, the jumps every synth at the other sections is supposed to be separate
id suggest moving this one to column 4 to balance out the jacks over the hands more
In the following section make sure all the jack anchors are the same in repeating sections since 151425|1,151560|1,151695|1 does repeat but the anchor does not 153587|3,153722|4,153857|3
Missing note?
Following here there is a drumstream but you only map some jacks. id suggest mapping the streams and either make it dense jumpstream or just nomral handstream. if you make the flow comfotable this won't impact on the map much
on the player much*
I hope this is better
This anchor stands out quite allot in this section. why not move 110344|3 to column 2
This does not have to be a jump since 67236 and 67506 are also not jumps
this should be a jump since 58723 is also a jump
58182|1 and 62641|1 . Both of these short ln's do represent the guitar, but i feel that they will only make the patterns they are in more uncomfortable to acc and not add much to them. so i recommend removing them
this can be a real nuisance to hit. id suggest re-arranging the pattern to something like https://i.imgur.com/18KJCof.jpg
thanks for the image, it saved me like 3 minutes
how about extending the following ln's like https://i.imgur.com/KkwCTIJ.jpg to more align with the bass in the background being wonky
also applies to 185884|2,186155|1,186290|4
I wanted to represent the "my head is spinning" line
49668|2,49871|2,49938|1 and 53992|3,54195|2,54263|3,54398|2 are not the same difficulty as each other due to the reverse shield that one has and the other doesn't.
make sure you apply the same at 183722|3,183722|2,183925|2,183992|1,184128|2
Id recommend ending this ln 1/4th sooner to avoid a weird release timing with the other ln's
I feel that this is a unnecessary anchor. id recommend avoiding it if possible either by making the jumptrill a normal jumptrill. or by changing the lane of 46019|1,46087|2
This should be a hand since its synth + kick which is how the rest of this section represents hands
Having this be a jump might be a little dense for what the music is here in my opinion, just a single note would be enough to convey the same feeling
Should be a hand to stay consistent with your layering in this section
Following pattern can be a little awkward with the one handed trills on both hands 27438|2,27506|1,27574|2,27641|3,27709|4,27776|3 . maybe restructure it to something like https://i.imgur.com/OKVEO5P.jpg . which also brings with it a trill on each 1/1 to emphasize the buildup in the music.
i used a different pattern with a one handed jump every beat that emphasizes the build up, because the center trill every beat was a little uncomfortable for me
Following section has small break parts where you currently just dump streams. but I think it would be much cooler if you more accurately followed the kicks
the map is cooler by 1% now!
in the music following a burst/stream of percussion can be heard. why not map it? something like [img]https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/996350990309658654/1198246644731355206/image.png?ex=65be3526&is=65abc026&hm=159b4d5ea29b21ec64d29f1d5f4e931ec7f79f034baf274e0b71fe5a8bd29ec1&=&format=webp&quality=lossless&width=247&height=675[/img]
that img inbed did not work
here working link https://i.imgur.com/1KZR8XX.jpg
same applies to 223182
that part is supposed to be kind of a "calm before the storm" part, i want the difficulty to only really ramp up after the first drop. at the end i wanna keep the part the same for consistency and because people might have low hp after the hard part before it, and i dont wanna make another diff spike after it. if you got this far you deserve to pass.
Should there not be an ln coming from here to the next 1/2 to stay consistent with the ln at 4803|3 , 6965|4 etc.
this also applies to 15615 and 17777
also applies to 218858 , 221020 , 223182
In the intro section you have jacks layered like 3992|1,4128|4,4263|4 after a short ln in a break between the long ln. but in the 2nd part of the intro you don't do this, for example 12641|2,12776|4,12911|3. the same problem but the other way around goes for the patterns like 4938|2,5074|4,5209|2 where its not jacking but then 13587|3,13722|1,13857|1 where it is.
make sure its also consistent in the section following 217236