The Empress
UNDEAD CORPORATION
Source:
Tyrant
Tags:
stamina, jumpstream, electronic, english, rock, warrior, metal, touhou, 暴君, 東方紅魔郷 ～ the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil
BPM:
270
Length:
4:19
Passes/Fails:
138 / 2013
Pasted section so you know what to do
idk why this would be here honestly you should just make them single notes if you're not gonna commit to a full trill
Pasted section you already know what to do
Seems pretty unintentional that there's a hand here
Another pasted section so you know the drill
pasted section so do what previous mods tell you to do
do what you did with the other chordjack sections to this one
since this is pasted just do what you did last time
Make this a trill cuz structure consistency!
This and other jumps on the 1/2nd and 1/4th line are again, very off-putting and likely should be on the 1/1st line
this jump doesn't go to anything
There should be more jumps in this section for the crashing sounds
pasted section so you know what to do
apply the same mods to this section as the one that's similar to it
since this part is pasted just repeat the mods from the previous time it was charted
a very random jump that I do not understand being where it is
kind of a random jump but I can understand why it's here, just doesn't really fit regardless
this pattern goes against the already set trilly structure you've set up so far so you should probably re-chart this and map it a bit more accurately
move this hand down to the 1/2nd line
this entire section it would be better for hands to be placed on the 1/2nd line as opposed to the 1/1st line because the crashing sound happens there instead
should probably not be mapped like that idk it feels super out of place and you should keep the jumps to 55499 and 55721
Make this a jumptrill to match this section's structure
would work a bit better as a jumptrill up until 48388
this hand isn't mapped to a sound that justifies it being there
a more stream-like pattern would be more fitting here
not much reason this would need to be a jump, and the jump right after could get away with being a hand instead
instead of starting the jump trill so late at 24055 you should probably do it at 23499 instead and have the buildup be jumpstream starting from 22388
should probably change this trill into the handstream pattern right before it just because it would make a bit more sense