In general in this section you need to decide if you are going to use shorter lns for when the vocal are consecutive or make everything longer. Because lns like 19469|5 feel out of place in comparison to the rest of the section
Ex. 14258|6 you could do something like this and just have shorter lns for the vocals that are faster than the rest, something like that works 16153|5 etc. https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/319456257712979980/1109849419496566814/image.png
Kinda simlar thought can be applied here just be consistent: 33522|6
In the section
I feel like the part at 33522|6 was already pretty good, but I made some minor changes
This should be an ln and shorten 38890|1
There is no note on the sixth column at 39.48 lol
In general in this section you need to decide if you are going to use shorter lns for when the vocal are consecutive or make everything longer. Because lns like 19469|5 feel out of place in comparison to the rest of the section
Ex. 14258|6 you could do something like this and just have shorter lns for the vocals that are faster than the rest, something like that works 16153|5 etc.
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/319456257712979980/1109849419496566814/image.png
Kinda simlar thought can be applied here just be consistent: 33522|6
In the section
I feel like the part at 33522|6 was already pretty good, but I made some minor changes
This should be an ln and shorten 38890|1
There is no note on the sixth column at 39.48 lol