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Madeon

Created by: Adri
Submitted: almost 4 years ago
Ranked: almost 4 years ago
Source: n/a
Tags:
electronic
BPM: 125
Length: 3:00
Passes/Fails: 920 / 3914

[4K] 20.86 - Insane

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arpia97
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almost 4 years ago

You transitioned longjacks into just slow js in the same section
I very strongly suggest you keep this part consistent

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arpia97
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almost 4 years ago

it would be nice if you lightly layered the drums here as well

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arpia97
Administrator
almost 4 years ago

I think this is a pretty important sound here but there isnt any emphasis.

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arpia97
Administrator
almost 4 years ago

The music changes direction but the streams are just going a single direction so I think its ok to diversify the stairs here


Adri
Creator
almost 4 years ago

Applied some direction changes to fit the idea, hard to tell if i did it okay with this density but it should be good

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arpia97
Administrator
almost 4 years ago

direction change?

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arpia97
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almost 4 years ago

Double coz piano?


arpia97
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almost 4 years ago

132558

arpia97
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almost 4 years ago

134478

arpia97
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almost 4 years ago

136398

arpia97
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almost 4 years ago

138318

arpia97
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almost 4 years ago

140238

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arpia97
Administrator
almost 4 years ago

It suddenly becomes wayy to light compared to what you were doing, maybe you are trying to ease out into the next section but I think it could be heavier.


Adri
Creator
almost 4 years ago

Yea it didn't feel right to start putting so heavy patterns between two easy parts, but when playing it feels even weirder to not have them. So I made it a bit more like the start

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arpia97
Administrator
almost 4 years ago

it would be better if this jack is heavier coz of the drop


Adri
Creator
almost 4 years ago

also replaced some triples with doubles since there was no particular big sound

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arpia97
Administrator
almost 4 years ago

double coz drum?

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arpia97
Administrator
almost 4 years ago

The woof starts here so the pattern would express the music better if the stairs changed directions in this specific spot or the stair breaks here or smthn


Adri
Creator
almost 4 years ago

Totally

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arpia97
Administrator
almost 4 years ago

Why are these doubles?


Adri
Creator
almost 4 years ago

Wanted some intensity, but it's a bit dumb so i replaced with jacks !

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arpia97
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almost 4 years ago

I think it would be nice if you can look over this section again
There are some sounds that you may have missed (sorry if you deliberately omitted them, but I think it would be more interesting if they were rather mapped)
and since this section is very simple it could use some stronger jack structure


Adri
Creator
almost 4 years ago

The whole thing is just a build-up on the drum, I could add more but i honestly have no idea how to make the vocals stand out since it's at the same time as the drums

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arpia97
Administrator
almost 4 years ago

Just a personal thought on this one - I strongly don't think this pattern fits in this specific spot
I guess just give a second thought on this one, ill leave this up to you


Adri
Creator
almost 4 years ago

Changed it with two broken stairs (miiii[long stair]-ssing[first broken stair]-you[second broken stair])

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arpia97
Administrator
almost 4 years ago

Either that becomes a single or 47838 becomes a double, suggest looking throughout this whole section for this and unify it to one rule


Adri
Creator
almost 4 years ago

I chose single, that was a mistake!

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arpia97
Administrator
almost 4 years ago

This part can be a bit more technical coz it has that drop


arpia97
Administrator
almost 4 years ago

43038 you are actually missing a double here if you were following the instrumentals

arpia97
Administrator
almost 4 years ago

if im correct about the above 43998 shouldnt be a double

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arpia97
Administrator
almost 4 years ago

Suggest making this the same type of hand (ex. 123/234 only or 124 134 only) because its the same drum sound and the rest being the other type

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arpia97
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almost 4 years ago

suggest quad coz finisher note and to give distinction from 38238|3,38238|4,38238|1


arpia97
Administrator
almost 4 years ago

i know there is no vocal but I think its viable

Adri
Creator
almost 4 years ago

I think you pasted the wrong time ^^

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arpia97
Administrator
almost 4 years ago

These notes can be emphasized more imo

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arpia97
Administrator
almost 4 years ago

These are heavier than compared to 29358|2,29358|1 which actually have a heavier sound. I think you are trying to focus more on the vocals but the pattern seem to not match the general intensity of the song

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arpia97
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almost 4 years ago

maybe these can be doubles instead because 28878|2,28878|4,28878|3 this sound is a lot more intense but you used the same pattern

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arpia97
Administrator
almost 4 years ago

Double?


arpia97
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almost 4 years ago

25518^

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arpia97
Administrator
almost 4 years ago

suggest you make an anchor here instead of 13218|3,13338|3 these coz repeating sound


Adri
Creator
almost 4 years ago

I put the anchor first because of the triple, it would be too hard if i accepted