It suddenly becomes wayy to light compared to what you were doing, maybe you are trying to ease out into the next section but I think it could be heavier.
Yea it didn't feel right to start putting so heavy patterns between two easy parts, but when playing it feels even weirder to not have them. So I made it a bit more like the start
The woof starts here so the pattern would express the music better if the stairs changed directions in this specific spot or the stair breaks here or smthn
I think it would be nice if you can look over this section again
There are some sounds that you may have missed (sorry if you deliberately omitted them, but I think it would be more interesting if they were rather mapped)
and since this section is very simple it could use some stronger jack structure
The whole thing is just a build-up on the drum, I could add more but i honestly have no idea how to make the vocals stand out since it's at the same time as the drums
Just a personal thought on this one - I strongly don't think this pattern fits in this specific spot
I guess just give a second thought on this one, ill leave this up to you
These are heavier than compared to 29358|2,29358|1 which actually have a heavier sound. I think you are trying to focus more on the vocals but the pattern seem to not match the general intensity of the song
You transitioned longjacks into just slow js in the same section
I very strongly suggest you keep this part consistent
it would be nice if you lightly layered the drums here as well
I think this is a pretty important sound here but there isnt any emphasis.
The music changes direction but the streams are just going a single direction so I think its ok to diversify the stairs here
Applied some direction changes to fit the idea, hard to tell if i did it okay with this density but it should be good
direction change?
Double coz piano?
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It suddenly becomes wayy to light compared to what you were doing, maybe you are trying to ease out into the next section but I think it could be heavier.
Yea it didn't feel right to start putting so heavy patterns between two easy parts, but when playing it feels even weirder to not have them. So I made it a bit more like the start
it would be better if this jack is heavier coz of the drop
also replaced some triples with doubles since there was no particular big sound
double coz drum?
The woof starts here so the pattern would express the music better if the stairs changed directions in this specific spot or the stair breaks here or smthn
Totally
Why are these doubles?
Wanted some intensity, but it's a bit dumb so i replaced with jacks !
I think it would be nice if you can look over this section again
There are some sounds that you may have missed (sorry if you deliberately omitted them, but I think it would be more interesting if they were rather mapped)
and since this section is very simple it could use some stronger jack structure
The whole thing is just a build-up on the drum, I could add more but i honestly have no idea how to make the vocals stand out since it's at the same time as the drums
Just a personal thought on this one - I strongly don't think this pattern fits in this specific spot
I guess just give a second thought on this one, ill leave this up to you
Changed it with two broken stairs (miiii[long stair]-ssing[first broken stair]-you[second broken stair])
Either that becomes a single or 47838 becomes a double, suggest looking throughout this whole section for this and unify it to one rule
I chose single, that was a mistake!
This part can be a bit more technical coz it has that drop
43038 you are actually missing a double here if you were following the instrumentals
if im correct about the above 43998 shouldnt be a double
Suggest making this the same type of hand (ex. 123/234 only or 124 134 only) because its the same drum sound and the rest being the other type
suggest quad coz finisher note and to give distinction from 38238|3,38238|4,38238|1
i know there is no vocal but I think its viable
I think you pasted the wrong time ^^
These notes can be emphasized more imo
These are heavier than compared to 29358|2,29358|1 which actually have a heavier sound. I think you are trying to focus more on the vocals but the pattern seem to not match the general intensity of the song
maybe these can be doubles instead because 28878|2,28878|4,28878|3 this sound is a lot more intense but you used the same pattern
Double?
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suggest you make an anchor here instead of 13218|3,13338|3 these coz repeating sound
I put the anchor first because of the triple, it would be too hard if i accepted