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BPM:
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Length:
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Triples as finishers might work well
There are strong drums here, and 122281|3,122417|2,122554|4 sounds like this you made as minijacks throughout the map. Don't you think this is a bit too weak??
clap and drum, same expression. Consistency issue
same anchor for different sounds. I think it ruins the feeling
These two have no reason to be a 34 double like this. It collides with 94326|4,94326|3,94599|4,94599|3,94872|3,94872|4 which exist as different sounds and the actual drum sounds are 93917|2,94054|3,94054|4 here
95417|1,95417|2,95690|1,95690|2,95963|1,95963|2 these too. I think you wanted to somehow represent the claps but it is way too inconsistent
98144|4,98144|2,98417|2,98417|4,99781|1,99781|2,100054|1,100054|2,100326|1,100326|2 I really want to point out all of these but there is too many
Ok i changed a lot about the patterns, tell me if it's ok now
I don't like it at all. It removes emphasis on the jacks and the background drums aren't interesting
This can be a double to emphasize the guitar finishing and there is also a tick there so I think it would be enough reason
This drum line is wayyyy too significant to be kept like this. Suggest making them doubles
1/4 roll should be present here like what you did 83690 here
I don't hear it, but i put rolls so tell me if it's okay now
34 jump for consistency
same sound but you did single here while double on 65963? These kinds of consistency issues are present throughout the whole map so I would like to ask of you to pay more attention to these types of details
Since the emphasis was on the previous sounds and I didn't have a lot of room to put a jump without making it a weirder pattern, i let it as a single not. I put a jump now, but it's weird.
They are all the same type of jump. I believe this set should rather keep the same concept of split jumps coz they are the same sound 55872|1,55872|4,56008|1,56008|4,56281|4,56281|3,56554|4,56554|3
This right hand only pattern is wayy to sudden. The one before that was both-handed. There is nothing special about this specific section to suddenly orient it right-handed only
51508|2,51508|1,51644|1,51644|2,51781|2,51917|1,51917|2,52054|1,52190|1,52190|2 at least this one that comes after has a much more distinguishable sound
I liked that gimmick but if you think it's too hard i'll alleviate it
43735|2,43735|3,43872|2,43872|3,44008|2,44008|3 you are using the same expression in the same section. It would be better to change it
(i needed to say they are different sounds from each other but you would get what im saying)
These are all the same sound so it should all be the same type of double. No reason to make them different
I think these are unnecessary ghost notes
same sound as 27236 but why single??
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Big crash sound, why not a triple? you end up with problems like having to make 20145 this a single even though its a drum, which you've been making as doubles since the beginning
this oht is so out of the blue. It seems to not fit with the rolls you made around it
Drum so double
make this a minijack so it follows 14963|1,15099|1 this rule
Drum so it should definitely be a double