Here you could use also the same sound you are following on the top diff so this part doesnt feel too empty
Is essentially the same as 107629 so i dont see why you changed the density of the jumps from every two white lines to 1
You could add a ln here to keep the vocal
Consider adding a jump here
This should start on 63848, you could end lns also here
No reason for this to be a jump, if you used vocals like 37129 then you should also make 49879 a jump
add a note here to complete vocals, also in 31691
32441 also
Here you use jumps but in 21004 you use hands when is the same sound, and also after that you use a quad. Would work better if you let like the first one (just jumps or hands as this is pretty loud)
Here you could use also the same sound you are following on the top diff so this part doesnt feel too empty
Is essentially the same as 107629 so i dont see why you changed the density of the jumps from every two white lines to 1
You could add a ln here to keep the vocal
Consider adding a jump here
This should start on 63848, you could end lns also here
No reason for this to be a jump, if you used vocals like 37129 then you should also make 49879 a jump
add a note here to complete vocals, also in 31691
32441 also
Here you use jumps but in 21004 you use hands when is the same sound, and also after that you use a quad. Would work better if you let like the first one (just jumps or hands as this is pretty loud)