Cry For You (Dougal & Gammer Remix)
September
Source:
n/a
Tags:
rave, dance, pop, Handstream, Jumpstream, hs, js, stamina, hardcore, electronic, dancing shoes
BPM:
173
Length:
3:52
Passes/Fails:
729 / 1714
there is a note here still you can make it like https://i.imgur.com/PBsSX4l.jpg
Following section is a vocal buildup but the anchors are a bit messy. here is an example on how to build up the anchors and density a little cleaner https://medal.tv/games/quaver/clips/1urf9QllM5Ig8R/d1337jMAn652?invite=cr-MSxtZ2QsMjI2OTI3NjAs
This hand does not fit. there is no special sound going on and its the only one you placed in this section on just a vocal
Missing note/jump?
There is a vocal here. though mapping it as a jump as it is right now will create a big anchor on the 2nd column so you might want to do a little re-arranging
Following this in the first intermission i currently find it very chaotic and it could use allot of refining. what i suggest doing is actually following the melody and for the first rice part connecting the melody and then keeping the rest from the melody disconected from the patterning. and then when the ln's come in use ln's for only the melody and not for everything like in this example i made https://medal.tv/games/quaver/clips/1ur7y88-9QNhfa/d1337sQZWLMR?invite=cr-MSw5ZWIsMjI2OTI3NjAs . you can also keep notes in the same column for emhasis on same sounds/pitch
this also applies to 122182 for the rice part again
okay looked over it again and its not as chaotic as i thought it be at first but still you can take the suggestion
It'd make more structural sense to can these and continue the jumpstream
jumptrill*
Place a jump here cuz every beat but this one has it
Apply previous changes to this
Copied section
Make this a jump to fit the section that it's in
Copied section so just do what you did previously
This should be a jump because you're mapping them to vocals here
This jump should be on 145939 instead for more accurate vocal representation
It would be good to add another note next to this LN to make it a jump, just because of the sound effect justifying it and making the transition smoother once agai
Since this section is copied do what you did before
I can sort of understand why there's no jump here but it would still fit better and make more sense structurally to include a jump
Another note to get rid of for a better transition
This section should include jumps on every beat (1/1 {white lines}) and half beat (1/2 {red lines}) to fit the structure a bit better, otherwise it seems odd that jumps are only placed on every half beat
There isn't a note here (there should be one)
Should probably get rid of this just so the transition is smoother
I can understand why this is isn't a jump but seeing as this isn't a notable enough vocal pause it would play much better as a jump anyway