until 75457 these kicks is really ignored right here (73229 - 73400 for example) and could revamp to 2|2|4 instead(?) it's just weird in playability wise
imo rechart this entire part the way it is now with the background rythm and the main kick only it plays very akwardly, so try to make it less empty to make it play better
until 75457 these kicks is really ignored right here (73229 - 73400 for example) and could revamp to 2|2|4 instead(?) it's just weird in playability wise
its even weirder 2|2|4 especially having it transition to 75457 (same with the first part)
there's fade out and one hand minijacks is way too much, just avoid them and make it as stream since it's going back to verse section
99800
done to streams
was expecting a pause there, you could remove them or make it single notes to emphasize ``61743``` or it's most likely continued on that line
94314
50% speed you can hear it making more sense
alongside it sounding the same as 94400|4,94400|3,94485|1,94485|2,94571|1,94571|2 but just fainter
until 42029, better to put a single note every redline (before chord) so there's some progression
done (same 1:12.714 to 1:15.114)
i lied removed them theyre super faint in 100% speed and mapping it to make it comfortable isnt the thing for me
there is no pitch change so it could be better to make it same as 28229
same goes 33971
done
inconsistency this is 1/2 but 61040 is 1/4 (61211|2 should also be a jump btw) why. also you do it again at 61211|2
fixed inconsistency
imo rechart this entire part the way it is now with the background rythm and the main kick only it plays very akwardly, so try to make it less empty to make it play better
idk how im meant to make it less empty with there only being a kick and drum
this is 1/3 why is it 1/4 same with 75440
fixed
(ages ago but forgot to update it)