this part casues a density inconsistency and also a chord inconsistency, make them short lns and continue with the same patterning that is layered for the same sounds throughout the section imo.
again, changing the rice notes to lns here is not justified because there's no actual change to those sounds themselves, even if this was to represent the long riser in the background, i would advise against.
added 1/8's to the ones having the release cut piano notes between the LNs, which is the first note you've shown and another one not mentioned, the one in 66514 is excluded
technically there are sounds on the 1/12 snap, would represent with a 1/6 roll (short lns if you apply previous suggestion mod) instead, as that's the more prominent sound
changing the rice notes to lns here is not justified because there's no actual change to those sounds themselves, even if this was to represent the long riser in the background, i would advise against.
missing notes in the 1/4 snap
check dms again
*do the same between 218014 - 218514
missing note in 1/4 snap between these notes
there is a 1/6 trill here that needs representation, it is quite prominent
211014 - 211347 here too
and 214014 - 214347, 216347 - 216680, 221680 - 222014, 224680 - 225014
not 1/6, I heard 1/8 in slow motion
not 1/6, I heard 1/8 in slow motion
this should be resnapped to 1/6, ending on 190347
do also change this if and when you change 166347 - 166764
check dms for this one
should be a jump because the drum already plays here
is not consistent with your previous idea for this sound pattern/chord progression (idk what you call it in music) at 86680 - 88014
this part casues a density inconsistency and also a chord inconsistency, make them short lns and continue with the same patterning that is layered for the same sounds throughout the section imo.
this seems to be a 1/6 stream instead
these notes make the piano pause undermined and ruins representation, they're also dumped in because they don't represent any sound, would remove
missnap, it's 1/2 -> 1/4 -> 1/8 -> 1/1
same between 150514 - 150680
and in the next section 153180 - 153347, 155847 - 156014
noticed
would add a 1/8 note for piano
same between 145264 - 145347
same between 151597 - 151680
one of these felt like a 1/12 flam lol
the chimes aren't at all represented, that makes me Very Sad
then I will make you HAPPI again :D
again, changing the rice notes to lns here is not justified because there's no actual change to those sounds themselves, even if this was to represent the long riser in the background, i would advise against.
this goes to 98514
this goes to 98264
this goes to 97764
this goes to 97514
pretty sure this was an accident-
well spotted :troll:
missing note on the next 1/4 snap 77097
i really don't like how only some of the main melody has lns to represent them
would add a 1/8 note between these
added 1/8's to the ones having the release cut piano notes between the LNs, which is the first note you've shown and another one not mentioned, the one in 66514 is excluded
i mean this works but a 1/8 burst would fit better by technicality
technically there are sounds on the 1/12 snap, would represent with a 1/6 roll (short lns if you apply previous suggestion mod) instead, as that's the more prominent sound
these sounds are actually in the 1/12 snap but for playability issues 1/6 snap is fine.. maybe make them short lns for emphasis?
I'd keep the 1/6 short notes here cuz I think they fit the blips more
make one of these a ln for consistency's sake
again, these lns seem to end early since one of the sounds plays all the way till 43847
these streams should be in the 1/8 snap, but only the selected notes
big oopsies, ignore this, they're in 1/6
As you wish, lord Riley
to be technical, these are also missnapped, the sounds they are supposed to represent are in the 1/8 snap
these are missnapped, it is a 1/8 triplet (in the 1/16 snap)
changing the rice notes to lns here is not justified because there's no actual change to those sounds themselves, even if this was to represent the long riser in the background, i would advise against.
this ln ends early, the sound it represents itself ends at 10680
following the bass notes here, not exactly the sound itself