Rewrite Nightmare
Helblinde

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Created by: Judge
Submitted: almost 4 years ago
Ranked: about 3 years ago
Source: n/a
Tags:
electronic techno house j-core Breakcore
BPM: 200
Length: 5:06
Passes/Fails: 86 / 667

[4K] 34.03 - Nightmare

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Arkener
User
about 3 years ago

Overall, very good map as always ^^ but i still need to learn more about the intention of the minijacks you make XD i'm not used to see them that often, sometimes it can be a mistake, or sometimes it can be justified, sorry if i mark it as an issue when from your perspective is completely correct. Hope this gets ranked soon too! :D

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Arkener
User
about 3 years ago

Same as https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/14116/mods#mod_2053 (if you made it multiple times i think there's an intention behind, so i'll stop pointing out this particular minijack to know what do you think)


Hinanawi Tenshi
Creator
about 3 years ago

Like all these answers, I am not a map made to play this map easily.
The song is intense, and I think some of the sounds should be expressed as if they were barking my hands.

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Arkener
User
about 3 years ago

After hearing it in 25%, it shouldn't be a minijack here 180210|4 so i think you should mirror the two notes above it to make it smoother


Hinanawi Tenshi
Creator
about 3 years ago

There were many parts that changed the meaning as we continued to update.
Originally, I used it to emphasize the intense feeling.
Now it's more consistent and I've made some changes with more emphasis in my own way.

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Arkener
User
about 3 years ago

I think there's a better way to reallocate this pattern (this is just a picky opinion, ignore it if you think it's okay, i was thinking about it because jumping to 300bpm streams in the middle of a break using a stair + a mini trill can be very abrupt), so it's good to point out, just to make sure.


Hinanawi Tenshi
Creator
about 3 years ago

The shape of the minijack expresses the subtle changes in the note.
Currently, the shape has been changed more uniformly.
This does not mean to play comfortably. I like this expression even if it's uncomfortable.
https://i.imgur.com/ChnhBTE.jpg

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Arkener
User
about 3 years ago

Move this LN (also shorten 92610|3) to 94260, and also shorten 91635|2 to 94335

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Arkener
User
about 3 years ago

Move this LN to 87060 and also shorten the end of this LN 84735|4 to 87060 as well

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Suggestion
Arkener
User
about 3 years ago

You should mirror this to avoid the minijack


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Issue
Arkener
User
about 3 years ago

Move this LN to 8860

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Arkener
User
about 3 years ago

Move this LN to 8035

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Issue
Arkener
User
about 3 years ago

I'm not sure in this one, but I THINK this LN should be extended to 6410 and the starting point from this LN 6335|4 should be moved to there as well (please check)

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Issue
Arkener
User
about 3 years ago

Move this LN to 5935

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Issue
Arkener
User
about 3 years ago

Move this LN to 3460

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Issue
Arkener
User
about 3 years ago

All these LNs start one measure at 1/12th later, so be sure to re-snap it c:

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Issue
Arkener
User
about 3 years ago

Connect this LN to 2510

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Suggestion
11Bit
User
over 3 years ago

딴건 모르겠고 굳이 있을필요 없는 1/4 짤연이나 그런것들 다 지우거나 줄이셨음 좋겠음 200bpm 짜리라 치기 많이 벅찰거 같음 특히 레이트를 자유롭게 걸수있는 겜이라 레이트를 올리면 훨신 빡세질거임 어느파트에는 점프트릴도 아니고 스플릿 트릴에서 끝날때 핸드로 끝나서 짤연이 형성되는 경우도 있던데 그런것들 치기 많이 힘듬 부드럽게 쳐지는것도 아니고 어려운건 좋지만 전반적으로 어려운게 아니라 특정 한부분만 갑자기 어려우면 칠때 위화감이 많이 들 수 있음. 그리고 후반부 스트림파트에 롱놋으로 특정 음 강조하는건 알겠는데 갠적으로 전 불호


Hinanawi Tenshi
Creator
over 3 years ago

저같은 경우 노트 갯수를 줄인다는 것 자체가 맵의 대한 완성도를 줄이는 것이기에 7키에 비하면 당연히 표현 방식이 제한될수 밖에 없는 점을 감안하면서 이것도 줄이긴 했습니다. 다만 짤연, 롱놋직후 짤연 등의 표현은 표현적으로 한계가 되기 때문에 말씀하신것처럼 불편할 수 있습니다.
다만 현제 제가 가진 맵의 방향성은 노트 수가 많고 표현 할 수 있는것을 최대한 표현하는것이 방향성 이기에 bpm이 다소 높더라도 순간적 짤연, 롱놋 짤연 등의 표현은 그대로 갈것 같습니다.
하지만 말씀하신 부분을 검토하고 후반 부분의 롱놋 후 짤연 부분의 표현이 일부 잘못되었음을 인지하고 현제 수정하였습니다. 감사합니다.