Up In Smoke
USAO
Source:
n/a
Tags:
Kick's For Liberation 7 HARDCORE SYNDROME 12 Hardcore TANO*C hardstyle j-core hardcore Electronic
BPM:
190
Length:
4:15
Passes/Fails:
144 / 320
The mixed jump/hands feel needlessly confusing, especially for being right at the end.
255339 has a sound. It also seems to be beneficial to keep notes structurally.
sorry;w; busy wish IRC. i'll fix them a few days later
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From 232681 to 233313 it is hard to think that 1/8 trill is fit to the song. Please correct it or let me know about your intention or reason.
is my bad.
I don't think this expression fits the song, but I think it will be okay to go as it is. However, this expression does not match the overall structure of the song, and it is hard to think that harmony with the song is good. Why don't you put a single note on every 1/2 instead of 3/4?
aw nice
There is a sound but it is too small. It's hard to listen to when players play, so it's better to take it out. Also, 202207 doesn't have sound to put notes on. There is a bigger sound that appears at 201734, so I'd like to add a note to 201734.
195970|1 is less sound than 195813 and I think it's okay to express the sound of 195813 because 195970|1 is expressed. If you decide to put your note here, you will also have to put a note at 114971.
Please consider adding a note as same as 112918. If you add it, you have to add notes on the same sounds as 193760.
Like 75418, it seems good to add notes for the synth sound.
Like the example below, I'd like you to express the synth in 133049. The synth expression is missing only in that timing, so it feels different. The same goes for 138102.
https://i.imgur.com/X6sf4zi.jpg
If you followed the structure of 50155, it would seem good to make a structure similar to the example below
https://i.imgur.com/NSnGWAa.jpg
It would be nice to add a note to the 2 column
Add a note would be great
It looks like a ghost note, but it looks better to take it out. Why don't you take out one note from 121286 and make double at 121207?
Why don't you add a note? I think I'm quite sure there is a 'tic' sound. Especially, you can hear a tic sound at 114181 more clear, so it seems better to have a structure from the front. Take this modding with optional please!
Double would be good
Please add a note. This sounds so clear
There is a structural error when compared to 50155. It seems structurally better to change to 50155.
Structural errors exist when compared to 39734, but 69892's notes are likely to follow the structure of 49681, so it is not necessary to fix them. However, I hope you find more good pattern.
69891|2,69970|3,70049|2 ctrl+H
What do you think about moving the note to number 4 col to equal balance of both hands?
It seems structurally better to change the pattern here as 50155.
If you apply the pattern of 50155: https://i.imgur.com/PJcFwoX.jpg