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Overall a really solid chart! I really enjoyed playing this and going through it! Just some small little edits, ie layering of notes, and fixing the break to not be a break.

But yeah, really enjoyed it. I hope to see it ranked someday!

some of the jumps past here felt really unnecessary. Unlike 00:40.191, there didn't sound like there was any emphasis to encourage them being there. Maybe keep it as the same jumpstream patterns used in the section just before?

This is more of a general thing, adding on to some prior comments. LNs appear early in some cases if they're supposed to be mapped to vocals. Any sort of elaboration on this would be appreciated, and if i'm being deaf or the like, my apologies.

If not, please look back through and listen to the song to see where i'm on about.

This stream section with the jumps was also really fun! It was comfortable to play and nicely synced!

the break here seemed really unexpected. You could maybe map a simple section here following some of the major sounds from the guitar? Just a suggestion, but i'd recommend mapping it if you do submit for ranked.

This LN also has the same issue if its following the vocals. It should be later than it is.

The LNs here seem to be really early if they're following the vocals. They should be here 66741. If not the vocals, could you elaborate?

This entire jump section was really fun to play! it synced really nicely and it flowed well too!

these jumps could be mapped as single notes, just because there isn't really a defining sound that really emphasizes them as jumps.

not sure what these LNS are following? could you possibly elaborate?

the notes here could be removed to follow the rhythm, the first one moreso.

theres a beat here that's not mapped. it might be in your best interest to map these beats as single notes so that theyre all represented. It's fine as is, because it works, but does seem to scale in difficulty a lot compared to the rest of the map.