Be Wild
Camellia feat. Yukacco

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Created by: Lollipop
Submitted: almost 4 years ago
Ranked: almost 4 years ago
Source: n/a
Tags:
hybrid trap MelonBooks ShopBGM Compilations 001 Nature
BPM: 160
Length: 4:48
Passes/Fails: 645 / 857

[7K] 23.61 - Untamed

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MapleSyrup-
User
almost 4 years ago

should end at 288254

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MapleSyrup-
User
almost 4 years ago

There's a guitar sound here

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MapleSyrup-
User
almost 4 years ago

These "anchors" are pretty bad. Re-arrange the patterns here

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MapleSyrup-
User
almost 4 years ago

the 1/4ths end here

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MapleSyrup-
User
almost 4 years ago

should make these into chords to be consistent with 17879 or vice versa

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MapleSyrup-
User
almost 4 years ago

should make these into chords to be consistent with 17879

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MapleSyrup-
User
almost 4 years ago

These "anchors" are pretty bad. Re-arrange the patterns here


Lollipop
Creator
almost 4 years ago

ok i tried something out

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MapleSyrup-
User
almost 4 years ago

Since you've mapped the percussions at 164785, it would make sense that you'd map these sounds too

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MapleSyrup-
User
almost 4 years ago

These anchors are awkward to play. I suggest changing them to this https://puu.sh/G6ZFi/6492f50028.png

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MapleSyrup-
User
almost 4 years ago

This transition is very awkward. Change it to something like this https://puu.sh/G6ZDc/a4fb58cc9a.png

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MapleSyrup-
User
almost 4 years ago

this should be a chord


Lollipop
Creator
almost 4 years ago

oop

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MapleSyrup-
User
almost 4 years ago

the sudden diff spike of the bursts here is too high, please nerf this section

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MapleSyrup-
User
almost 4 years ago

seperate the LNs (https://puu.sh/G6ZAB/723debc16d.png) so that the pattern is more coherent

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MapleSyrup-
User
almost 4 years ago

this vocal is in 1/4

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MapleSyrup-
User
almost 4 years ago

should make these into chords to be consistent with 17879 or vice versa

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sushi
User
almost 4 years ago

Remove them because they dont follow any sound


Lollipop
Creator
almost 4 years ago

oh huh didn't notice that, thanks

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sushi
User
almost 4 years ago

Add another note on c5 to emphasize the drum more


sushi
User
almost 4 years ago

actually, add a note on every 1/1 for the drums (from 108254 to 113879)

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sushi
User
almost 4 years ago

Remove


Lollipop
Creator
almost 4 years ago

repeat of the one under it

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sushi
User
almost 4 years ago

Remove them because they don't belong to any instrument and disrupt the flow


Lollipop
Creator
almost 4 years ago

they're there in the drum fills, so gonna have to deny

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sankansuki
User
almost 4 years ago

for this whole section, try to be as pitch relevant as possible (doesn't have to be perfect) especially on the stairs there's enough variance in each of them so you wont be playing the same stuff. also plays much more coherent and fun when its done right than randomly.
an example: http://puu.sh/G6uy4/303198dc09.jpg (time stamp at the bottom left)


Lollipop
Creator
almost 4 years ago

reworked some of the delay to better match pitch

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sankansuki
User
almost 4 years ago

move down 1/8th, same as first mod

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sankansuki
User
almost 4 years ago

http://puu.sh/G6uqq/cd6699c897.jpg more representative of the song imo

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sankansuki
User
almost 4 years ago

its not really audible at 100% speed, plus the snapping is not right either. something like http://puu.sh/G6umW/1973af50ee.jpg this instead maybe.

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sankansuki
User
almost 4 years ago

ideally you'd want this note to be in the same column as the next sound since they're the same. makes the pattern more coherent.
basically for this whole section (165254 to 168254)

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sankansuki
User
almost 4 years ago

something like this instead (http://puu.sh/G6uf3/8d3195a732.jpg), using a jack for that sound and on the correct snapping


Lollipop
Creator
almost 4 years ago

dont feel like putting a jack there but thanks for pointing out the snapping

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sankansuki
User
almost 4 years ago

add a note at last column

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sankansuki
User
almost 4 years ago

if you're going to have this note, then you'll probably want to add a note at 108113 and 108207


Lollipop
Creator
almost 4 years ago

removed that note

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sankansuki
User
almost 4 years ago

is a ghost note at that snapping, maybe move it down?

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sankansuki
User
almost 4 years ago

could maybe move up 1/4 snapping (to the blue line)

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sankansuki
User
almost 4 years ago

probably move this note to the first column


Lollipop
Creator
almost 4 years ago

huh sure

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sankansuki
User
almost 4 years ago

can add a note here, i.e. at spacebar

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sankansuki
User
almost 4 years ago

should be 29551 instead