Inochi no Tabekata
Eve
Source:
Smile
Tags:
how to eat life, japanese, funk, pop, jpn, kara no kioku
BPM:
143
Length:
3:41
Passes/Fails:
59 / 175
Just check through the entire map for any of the issues below
Missing drum here
180620
180934
If you can't think of anything to put in this section to represent things, honestly putting and sv there where the notes follow the glitchy synth wouldn't be a bad idea so there isn't an awkward waiting gap.
idk jackshit about svs but if this is bad and it should be replaced just dm me, ill replace with lns :D
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/319306088770043906/1267107739910541322/image.png?ex=66a7958a&is=66a6440a&hm=7d58551b4feb115a772ff15b4da8dc45bab1416e7b378ee3105abec919cb17d5&
Could probably do something like that, to still keep a stream going, while including the jacks you are aiming to have
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/319306088770043906/1267105319452934184/image.png?ex=66a79349&is=66a641c9&hm=55d3fe098321b2d7d373311e364c063fb114dadf514b78db5a40d66306eecc6a&
You could probably add a transition into the start of chord stream, this as an example
56109 to 61144 these should be single lns, until the build starts at 62823
Also it's not mandatory, but Id highly advise mapping the vocals that are there as well so it doesn't feel as empty in the map in that section as well, and even rolling into the start of the build
36179 to 41004 The representation of the guitar and vocals aren't consistent at all.
Why is 36179 to 36599 different from 37857 to 38277 despite being the same sound?
Or missing vocal sounds such as 38172.
This section needs to be cleaned up some
i REALLY REALLY cant tell if its still messy or not.. im sorry if it still is
Remove this, and make it similar to 29990 on 31669 to match how the guitar lines up
kind off confusing but i tried to fix it to my understanding, hope its right
missnapped chord
the synth is way too quiet to warrant 2 LNs
missing notes for the guitar in this section
swap these chords
same thing here 206215
add something simple here for the vocals
same thing at 94711
make this chord smaller
make these LNs more consistent with the ones in earlier sections.