the chord 1-3 feels very off considering the spacing is different from the other stairs, so i suggest his pattern to keep consistency. in addition, changing stream direction for pitch relevance benefits the depth here too
could add more differentiation here because these sounds are much more pronounced than say 128027|7,128027|3,128221|1,128221|4,128416|7,128416|5
also super subjective but I suggest making 128027|7,128027|3,128416|5,128416|7 and other similar instances where the piano is the same high key the same column position so like col 5 and 7 for each of them, this is to add more depth and create more emphasis on the mentioned sounds. for example
you could also switch the sequence every bar so it it transitions from col 5 and 7 -> 1 and 3
62377|7,62377|5,62377|3,62377|1 vs 59260|7,59260|4,59260|5,59260|2,59260|1 the emphasis on the piano sounds seem to be the same except for pitch, should be one or the other however I think 4 note chord for both would be more beneficial
move to col 1 to compliment the bracket pattern at 54585|6,54585|4,54975|5,54975|3,55364|4,55364|2 ? theres basically no contrast here with the piano so not finishing the bracket patterns makes it feel really out of place
could move to col 1 cus col 1 is really empty here
make this into chord for differentation with the other notes?
should be double? too subtle difference for triple, also this has pretty much the same emphasis as 179260|7 but this is single.
Should've been single, misread the sheet
the chord 1-3 feels very off considering the spacing is different from the other stairs, so i suggest his pattern to keep consistency. in addition, changing stream direction for pitch relevance benefits the depth here too
move col 7 for contrast with 132507|1 + theres no columns on 7 here
could add more differentiation here because these sounds are much more pronounced than say 128027|7,128027|3,128221|1,128221|4,128416|7,128416|5
also super subjective but I suggest making 128027|7,128027|3,128416|5,128416|7 and other similar instances where the piano is the same high key the same column position so like col 5 and 7 for each of them, this is to add more depth and create more emphasis on the mentioned sounds. for example
you could also switch the sequence every bar so it it transitions from col 5 and 7 -> 1 and 3
could move col7 cus 124520|3,124715|2,124715|4,124910|3,125104|4 plays badly
five notes is excessive, i would lowk recommend three because its really calm here and theres not to much contrast here,
should be on the white line, i dont see any justification for it to be on blue cus lack of emphasis on piano
89650|7
seems to be inconsistent with many instances in this section, do u want double or not lol,
Very confused about what you mean with double
move to col 3 cus theres a right hand bias, (for right thumb player)
should have another LN cus of piano chord sound occurring here
62377|7,62377|5,62377|3,62377|1 vs 59260|7,59260|4,59260|5,59260|2,59260|1 the emphasis on the piano sounds seem to be the same except for pitch, should be one or the other however I think 4 note chord for both would be more beneficial
move to col 1 to compliment the bracket pattern at 54585|6,54585|4,54975|5,54975|3,55364|4,55364|2 ? theres basically no contrast here with the piano so not finishing the bracket patterns makes it feel really out of place
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