onslaught -Retaliation of Bahamut-
Camellia

Created by: Alyca
Submitted: 5 months ago
Ranked: about 1 month ago
Source: SOUND VOLTEX EXCEED GEAR
Tags:
かめりあ, SDVX VI, BEMANI Song Remix Contest~2019~, BEMANI楽曲リミックスコンテスト~2019~, REFLEC BEAT groovin'!!, PHQUASE, artcore, hardstyle, electronic, instrumental
BPM: 238
Length: 1:57
Passes/Fails: 333 / 277

[4K] 31.70 - EXCEED

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Chopped Chin
Ranking Supervisor
2 months ago

i suggest make these doubles for drum sounds

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Chopped Chin
Ranking Supervisor
2 months ago

could reaarrange the handstream pattern so theres less notes on this middle trill just for better playability

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Chopped Chin
Ranking Supervisor
2 months ago

i suggest reduce to double cus It resembles the kick more at 82404|4,82404|3 than 82068|2,82068|1,82068|4

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Chopped Chin
Ranking Supervisor
2 months ago

how about make this double for kick?


Alyca
Creator
2 months ago

also turned this into a double 66061|3,66061|1

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Chopped Chin
Ranking Supervisor
2 months ago

not a big deal but i think the chord here is unnecessary cus not the same sound as what 61397|4,61397|2,61775|4,61775|3 is representing

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Chopped Chin
Ranking Supervisor
2 months ago

i dont hear any sound here, i think removing them would be ideal to emphasize the more audible sounds at 53206|2,53269|3,53458|4,53521|3


Chopped Chin
Ranking Supervisor
2 months ago

54844 same thing here, if you decide to reject my idea atleast do something with the trill at 55033|2,55096|1,55159|2,55222|1,55285|2,55348|1,55411|2 as it's pretty hard to hit

Alyca
Creator
2 months ago

Adjusted the trill, will keep the notes for now.

Alyca
Creator
2 months ago

Changed my mind, I'll remove the extra notes across all difs

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Chopped Chin
Ranking Supervisor
2 months ago

Im assuming youre mapping the cymbal sound here as a triple but the sound's is practically inaudible it just sounds like kick+guitar which coincidentally sounds almost the same as 49299|4,49299|3 so I suggest reduce to double


Chopped Chin
Ranking Supervisor
2 months ago

same thing for 50938|2,50938|3,50938|1

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Chopped Chin
Ranking Supervisor
2 months ago

nitpick (goes with all diffs) but I feel like this transition feels a bit loose, the pattern doesn't meet the rapid intensity shift of this music section especially at 19111|4,19174|3,19237|2 when this is the climax of the transition yet only mapped as 1/.4 single stream which kinda blends in with the next section (which is pretty calm in comparison) as its 1/3 single stream. So i suggest emphasize more the snare roll here rather than the hardstyle kicks to provide more contrast with the next section, you can do this with something as simple as dense jump stream