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i get that you're emphasizing the piano but the percussion is very pronounced here, so i suggest add a note for every instance that there is a snare so like at 113367 114034 etc.
I changed a couple thing in the whole section, thanks for the suggestion~
i suggest move to col 2 so there's no 4 note anchor and less right hand bias
could have an LN or two for melody sound
89033|3,89033|1,89033|4,89033|2 here too
section here could emphasize the consecutive 1/4 drum (or synth?) buildup by increasing the density here and make incorporate more jacks and less LN
I think i'd rather keep this build-up all LN so it's not ''harshly'' broken until the real Jacky/Techy part right after is actually there, i feel like it flows better as transition up to it, ignoring for now~
could make the ln release 1/6 less long for better playability, unnecessarily tight for some reason considering the sounds you're representing here doesn't rlly justify the release here
26200|1,26200|3,26283|4,26283|2,26367|3,26367|1 here too, if aply then do with other similar instances
Fixed on all instances i could find
i would highly suggest make these rice instead to emphasize the sounds present
Makes sense! Fixed
should be quad like 169034 no?
feels like way too much of a diff diff spike especially with the tight ln release and the quads.
I separated the LN gaps a bit more, you may check again after update please if thats good~
i suggest make these rice for more contrast for the break section + the melody sound here isn't present
I changed some of the LN for rice to create contrast but i decided to keep most of it to stay on the Mostly LN'y flow of the chorus.
why are the LN releases tighter than 161200|2,161367|2 ? there doesn't seem to be much of a change in the sounds here to justify and if there is, i'd say it's too subtle
Agreed, fixed
i dont hear anythings that warrants 1/8 streams here instead of the usual ln jack cuz the static is so quiet its barely noticeable if you compare it to for example 183951
you can give me an explanation, otherwise better to map it as jacks
move this down to the 1/2 to represent the drum ( everywhere else intentional or not the drum is represented)
the piano on lane 2 is also either on the 1/4 or 1/5 a bit earlier
should be a shorter ln because the boop boop boop boop only starts at 28867
the 1/4 sound is much more prominent than what this is mapped to so would prioritise that
instead of this random 1/4 stuff would recommend to just map the beep boop stuff in the fln
because the second buildup from 19701 is more intense and you map it to the beep boop to but express the buildup through density change of the existing sounds, instead of mapping on nothing.
borderline suggestion