996
Li HuaYu

Created by: MACarono
Submitted: 12 months ago
Ranked: 10 months ago
Source: Phigros
Tags:
Jack932, sv, reading, memory, jumpstream, js, handstream, hs, jack, electronic, edm
BPM: 140
Length: 2:22
Passes/Fails: 86 / 1013

[4K] 13.50 - Jack's Overtiredness

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Emik
Ranking Supervisor
10 months ago

i don't know why these two notes get special treatment when the song doesn't do anything in particular for those exact two notes, but additionally these are much too fast to react to

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Emik
Ranking Supervisor
10 months ago

trills should not be dipping below the jump, because that makes it look like you're supposed to hit them first

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Emik
Ranking Supervisor
10 months ago

i get that this, 123031, 129888, and 136745 are supposed to be cool variations but they feel way too different to be cohesive and feel very random in general. this part plays very awkwardly overall

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Emik
Ranking Supervisor
10 months ago

this exponential feels very stiff because of how sharp it is, and once again falls into the problem of being unplayable at 30+ scroll speed

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Emik
Ranking Supervisor
10 months ago

this transition looks very janky because you see the next 30 or so seconds. in general you should avoid using SSFs to invert such large chunks of the chart

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Emik
Ranking Supervisor
10 months ago

BPMs going twice as fast as the notes feels unintentional

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Emik
Ranking Supervisor
10 months ago

this burst feels out of place, the patterning is weird, and also this whole burst is denormalized in a way that feels unintentional


Emik
Ranking Supervisor
10 months ago
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Emik
Ranking Supervisor
10 months ago

should be a jump because kicks are represented with kicks unless it would cause minijacks

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Emik
Ranking Supervisor
10 months ago

this definitely should be a 1-3-1 to be consistent with using chords for snares, example pattern:

-x--
x-xx
-x--

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Emik
Ranking Supervisor
10 months ago

this note doesn't go to anything


Emik
Ranking Supervisor
10 months ago

same with 26280|3

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Emik
Ranking Supervisor
10 months ago

exponential is so harsh that it causes an effective displacement of notes like 22959|2 to be way over 400msx, making it unreadable for 30+ scroll speed