SLASH
Tokyo Machine
Source:
n/a
Tags:
Electronic, Dance, Spooky, Tech, LN, Long Notes, Jacks, Speed, Dump
BPM:
128
Length:
3:56
Passes/Fails:
237 / 657
63810 - 76935 The execution of this buildup is a bit weird to me. There are some sounds that are noticeably omitted and there's one part in this buildup (69435) that feels really out of place. If you could comb through this section to have it be a bit more accurate that would be great. This applies to all pasted sections as well
i guess
drum left out for better playability and flow
Every mod applies to copy pasted sections
no precussion
k
technically the ln ends should be on the 1/4 a bit earlier. tho if you hear the sound end later its alr
ignore this cuz for other lns you have prolongued releases too
the jump should be on 70724
changed this part a bit
im guessing you ingored this precussion for better flow? if so, can be left as is
same for copy pastes
same at 197521
pretty sure those 2 are the only ones, and yes it flows better without adding them
would just do the simple precussino here too (the ln is good enough for the beep sound
since you changed the lazorbeam sounds already to 4 notes 55724|1,55794|2,55841|3,55888|4,55935|2,55981|3,56075|4,56122|3,56169|2 can stay as it was before ( so 3 note burst
these are too dense
and are not really necessary
you could just delete it and leave the ln for every instance
same for 54962|2,55020|3,55079|2,55138|3,55196|2,55255|3 etc
ghost note, same for 197989|3 (idk now often you copypasted this section maybe theres more) mainly because u dont "improvise the sound at like 68497|4,68497|1 either and the other instances all have precussion
those shouldn't have been there indeed, it did not repeat after that only those ones u spotted (hopefully at least i also checked but if i missed its skill issue)
missing minijack,
compare with 193419|2,193536|2
maxi Jack
is my biggest issue.
its just the same copy pastes for 15 seconds when there is so much more patterning potential. If you weren't active i would have denied the map instantly just because of this.
now its copy paste for 7.5 seconds twice
is awkward and the patterning should be improved for better flow.
also continues the one lane bias
flipped it and that fixed it (I think)
there is a heavy bias for lane 3. distribute the patterning better, applies for copy pastes too.
change that i did honestly improved this part by a whole mile, i like it way more now that i fixed those lane bias issues, i'd advice for u to check again this part to be sure that i didnt mess something or miss something, as this part is kinda wack in its entirety
Ever mod applied below also applies for copy pastes
true (factual)
the cutoff for these lns is a bit earlier and fits better if you mapped the realease to the actual sound instead of just continuing
Ln's circumsized
better as 1/9 (mapped on 1/18snap) so the transition into the hand is better because this is a continuous sound.
you'll like it more with 1/10th i swear
better on the 1/4 below or change up patterning a bit since right now its representing nothing
ye
is a continuous sound and feels off with a cut in between
cut D'z Nuts
no reason for 4 notes since there is barely any sound
3 notes it is, i added 4 cuz that IIIH sound is kinda long and i needed something long that wasnt a LN
would map the screeches here too since its very light
Ain't light no more
this and 55724|1,55782|2,55841|3 being the same snaps is misleading.
would also buff the patterning for the screechy sound in every iteration cuz its quite intense.
I haz ze buffed a bit too much maybe but you can check