better make 81088 a jump cuz drum and delete 81138|3 cuz the weird sound hast started yet,
the entire stream section should be denser. light js with jumps for the drums would fit cuz compared to before and the cj after this part rn its very light
the patterning for the next two hands at 38988 doesn't flow well. would change them to 124,123 so that it doesn't create a unwanted jack with 38888|3 that doesn't really fit with the song
personally think the jump jacks at 171789 or 174989etc. are too light and play better mapped as (manippable) jumpstream
very awkward 4th column jack, rather make it a 23,14,23 split trill, same for 159289
very weird patterning considering its just the same sound. trill is fine
better make 81088 a jump cuz drum and delete 81138|3 cuz the weird sound hast started yet,
the entire stream section should be denser. light js with jumps for the drums would fit cuz compared to before and the cj after this part rn its very light
same for 136989-140989 (after 140989 there is no more drums so its good)
1/6 should still continue
missing note
would use lns to represent the static sound at 79488|1,79538|2
67388|3,67488|1,67538|4,67588|2,67638|1,67688|3,67788|4,67888|1,67988|3 its better if you put same sounds in the same column
send dm pic, change patterning to image because the brr still continues
the patterning for the next two hands at 38988 doesn't flow well. would change them to 124,123 so that it doesn't create a unwanted jack with 38888|3 that doesn't really fit with the song
would move 41188|4 to lane 3 for the same reason
would delete 35588|1 and 22788|1 and prioritise the drums like u did at 28588, 28888 cuz it plays and flows better.