Nightmare of Hornets Squad
Camellia
Source:
MEGANTO METEOR
Tags:
technical, breakcore, instrumental, electronic, amen break, expert, experimental
BPM:
255
Length:
4:42
Passes/Fails:
130 / 512
timing:
132709 should be at 132725,
add timing point at 114827 bpm 251
better move this to column 1 so it flows a bit better by creating a left to right hand movement
are better as single notes, because ur prioritizing the ln and it is weird having some of the precussion being a jump and some singles with the same intensity
the current pattern doesnt fit well
its so quiet id remove the grace and make it a single note
are too late by 1/8
should have a piano grace like 237144, u really seem to despise placing anything that resemples a 12 34 12 jumptrill lol. there is nothing wrong with that pattern
missing note
should be either completely gone or max 1 ln for the fadeaway but not a hand because there is no drum or new piano
what does this note stand for. compared to 162019|3 it just appears to be missnapped
should be 2 jumps like 157087, it also doesn't make sense to suddenly map the quiet piano over drums
not really a suggestion but yea, rather stick to one 1/6 note because the pattern is awkward and there is no sound that its representing
ghost note
id remove this note because consistentcy wise the same sound are singles at 106945|1,107122|1 and its not a new section
would mirror this so there is less unnecessary strain on right hand
if you compare the minijacks for 99298|3,99416|3,99534|4,99592|3,99651|4,99769|3,99887|3,99945|4,100063|4,100122|3 to the left hand its clearly hand biased
move to lane 4 so also this pattern has a minijack, it doesnt really the similar sounding thing before and after are jumpjack
u ofc can rearrange patterning if you want the jack elsewhere but no jack is weird
entire burst should be same snap use 1/7 if you want to keep the same amout of notes
same pitch so rather do same pattern
and for 95181|1,95181|3,95240|2,95240|4,95357|1,95357|3,95416|2,95416|4 the pitch changes so its better if you change to pattern
should be single note, pitch wise its the same as the single note before and not the jump after
should be a jumptrill or simple js like for 68828 ,
87299 would prefer a jumptrill cuz same intensity as the one mentioned above.
if you make the above js, can stay as is
this pattern repreats very often in this section
at least when the drum pitch is different it should be changed
would gradually lower the density according to pitch up to measure 39
rn it is very dense towards the end for the songs intensity
43181|1,43298|1,43416|1,43534|1 if you want to keep density at least remove this anchor
jump , youll have to rearrange patterning a bit
31299 should be single and 31416 should be double considering volume
(noticed i already wrote this lol but adding to it. )
remove cuz better to just focus on the piano
if you want to map this you should map 7519,8352,10708 and other screeching sounds too. in general the intro is so nothing i'd just delete everything up to 28706 but thats up to u
missnapped (color)
the patterning is awkward to play, rearrange it a bit
176532- 183462 since your are pretty faithful to the instruments snaps most of the time why didn't you map the piano properly here (it feels a bit odd to me, but if its intentionally done idm)
intentional
low notes are disregarded, ending piano section not represented because it's streams after anyway
what are the jumps here representing
also 131611|2,131650|1,131679|3,131724|4 is very awkward to play, would stick to only 1/6 for simplification cuz the transition fade is barely audible anyways
also i think 132356 and 132121 are ghost notes if you are following the piano
half accepted
awkward pattern has been slightly simplified, transition is very audible enough for the pattern to make sense
not ghost notes, appergiated piano
jumps for an overall intermediate difficulty section, all jumps would look ugly and hard, basic jumpstream pattern would collide with the jacks, creating spike
ghost notes
to represent suspense violin screech