heavydirtysoul
Twenty One Pilots
Source:
Blurryface
Tags:
rock, alternative, rap, hiphop, grunge, depressing, pop, trap, emo rock, emo rap, jump streams, LN's, streams, SV
BPM:
130
Length:
3:40
Passes/Fails:
1348 / 1332
I'd maybe consider making this LN until the final 114 beat, it visually looks a bit weird ending on the 1/2 so early?
the stream patterns here are pretty boring, I'd probably cut some streams to a max of 3 notes just to make it seem a bit more appealing. Right now it just plays as rolls really
i really dont think these notes justify being jumps
i would rather make the first jump a single note on column 1
and the second jump a single note on column 2 to still represent the sound going on
80275|4,80275|3,80390|2,80390|1,80506|3,80506|4,80621|2,80621|1 same issue here, just mirror the pattern
83967|1,83967|2,84082|3,84082|4,84198|2,84198|1,84313|3,84313|4 same issue here
kept those notes as jumps in the first vocal part since I agree theyre more prominent there, and less so here.
ghost note, in the entire intro here this is the only time you represent this sound, just removing this jump would resolve it
re:
12890|1,12890|2,13121|4,13121|1,13236|2,13236|3
16582|4,16582|1,16813|4,16813|3,16929|2,16929|1
18429|3,18429|2,18659|3,18659|4,18775|2,18775|1