cat's dance
marasy
Source:
n/a
Tags:
hatsune miku, vocaloid, piano, jacks, japanese, latin
BPM:
120
Length:
5:20
Passes/Fails:
204 / 324
suggest to move this to column 4, cuz its the same pitch as 63133|4 and after the transition column 3 is emphasised (64133|3,64258|3,64508|3,64633|3)
id suggest adding the shaka shaka filler between the marked notes too, cuz the change is a bit abrupt. after that the guitar is the main focus so the lighter mapping fits
62508|1,62883|2 in between these two too
and 127008 missing notes
ignore 127008 cuz it fits with guitar emphasis
this is still off
https://i.imgur.com/bG2NfMl.png
also do you ignore the clap there on purpose?
also this rhythm if mapped correctly is extremely stupid so i don't blame you if you simplify it or keep it as is, but as is it's still a bit off
i've mapped it literally to the guitar so i don't know what's "off"
and with the clap it wouldn't make any sense while playing, this is just some sort of "kiai" with the guitar
this entire section plays really weirdly imo with regard to chord sizing
i can't intuitively understand why the claps are switching from hands to jumps sometimes when looking at it
remapped the hands to be consistently on the piano's chords + moved some hands for consistency too
id move this to lane 4 so that the anchor below doesnt play into the new section
is quite awkward to hit while holding the column 3 ln
id cut off the long ln at 240883 to emphasize the fast piano
i'm not sure to apply this one, it's quite a climax and i think it plays well even tho it's a bit hard, i wouldn't say awkward. are you absolutely sure it's a mistake or it's just that you think it's hard ?
this plays fine imo
rather use short lns cuz its the guitar instead of the violin and the sound itself isnt very long
in general in the solo id focus on the claps being jumps cuz rn it feels quite random to me even considering it as a dumped improvised idea
especially 241633 and 242383 i didnt get why you ignored the claps / arent a jump cuz a lot of the time they are represented with jumps throughout the map and it feels a bit weird to suddenly exclude them
added some missing jumps, it's true that i sometimes completely ignore them like a background noise most of the time when the reste is much more emotional, we'll see how it goes
id move this note to lane 4 cuz the pattern is quite a harsh considering the maps difficulty or rearrange the patterning a bit so its easier to hit
hm nah sorry i like this and it feels really easy tbh considering the heavy jacks. i think theres really something to it for this sound
222258|1,222320|2,222383|3,222445|4,222508|2,222570|4
idk what this is representing
LOL idfk know, what happened ? (i played this map so much and didnt notice)
i also replaced the next sound with something consistent with what's next
the first ln for the guitar im guessing should reach to the second
219758|2,219883|3 also here the firsts guitar sound is up to the second marked note
ignore 219758|2,219883|3 i see the short stuff is a concept
good catch ! and indeed it's something with the release
1/7 fits the guitar better here
upon closer inspection its fits perfectly 1/8 by changing the pattern, let me know what you think of the new version
would include the unmapped claps here too
194133-195633
i dont see a concept here as to why you only use 2 note minijacks without any variety
would change it up a bit at 194758|3,194883|1,194883|4,195008|1 where there is a vocal break
also maybe change 197633|4,197758|4 from a minijack to emphasise the vocal and piano break
64133-95133
and 150133-165133
is probably what bugged me the most
the one hand switch stuff feels a bit oversimplified to me
also why doesnt 80383|2,80508|2,80758|1,80883|2,81008|1,81133|2,81383|2,81883|2,82008|1,82008|2,82133|1,82383|2,82508|2,82758|1,82883|2,83008|1,83133|2,83383|2,83508|1,83633|2,84133|1,84133|2,84383|2,84508|1,84883|2,85008|1,85133|2,85383|2,85508|2,85883|2,86383|2,86508|2,86633|1,86633|2,87133|2,87383|1,87633|2,87633|1 to 88133|2,88383|3,88508|2,88758|3,88883|2,89008|3,89133|2,89258|2,89258|3,89508|3,89633|3,89633|2,89883|3,90008|3,90133|2,90258|3,90383|2,90508|3,90883|3,90883|2,91008|2,91008|3,91258|2,91383|3,91508|2,91883|2,92008|3,92133|2,92133|3,92383|3,92508|3,92633|2,92758|3,92883|3,93133|2,93133|3,93258|2,93383|3,93508|3,93883|3,94008|2,94133|2,94383|2,94508|3,94633|3,94758|2,95008|3 not switch from left to right or more diverse representation.
1 - I've thought about adding more density to these parts, I'll see what I can do !
2 - I'm not sure what you mean tbh, but i'll change some stuff so i guess we'll see
so I ended up doing a major addition to density and layers on the calm parts, they should be much more interesting now !
and 133383|3,133383|4 should at least be a hand imo cuz its the climax of the section and has melody, drum, every instrument in the song that feels underrepresented as a jump
and 129383|3,129383|4 should be a single note to emphasize the following jump for the melody like for 34383|2,34383|1,34758|2,34758|1,35133|3,35133|1
these and the same notes in im guessing the copy pasted part from 116133: id move these notes into a differnt column to break the minijack (i dont hear anything that it could stand for.
mainly because this section feels very 2note minijack heavy that feels a bit too repetitive for a rythmically and melodically vibrant song
also compared to the first iteration 129133|1,129258|2 has a distinct guitar so u may want to change the patterning up a bit
I've done as suggested for the first two notes, however the third one fits well to the piano i think so i kept it
I've moved a note when the guitar started changing, other than that I don't really see how to vary it up (i'm not really focusing on the guitar that much)