Soulless Existence
Lorna Shore

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Created by: Albinus
Submitted: 5 months ago
Ranked: 14 days ago
Source: Pain Remains
Tags:
Metal, Metalcore, Deathcore, Stream, Jumpstream, Handstream, Jack, Chordjack, Handjack, Long note, English
BPM: 220
Length: 7:01
Passes/Fails: 16 / 38

[4K] 33.09 - Void of Feeling

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Suggestion
Hekireki
Ranking Supervisor
20 days ago

would add a note for the vocal here cuz it plays a bit void


Albinus
Creator
20 days ago

I only focus on instrumentals in this map, it would also be slightly odd to add a vocal note when the entire rest of the map ignores vocals

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Issue
Hekireki
Ranking Supervisor
20 days ago

ghost jump


Albinus
Creator
20 days ago

there is a kick that moment, and i map all kicks when there isnt a stream as a jump

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Issue
Hekireki
Ranking Supervisor
20 days ago

you can add like a light roll for the drums here but leaving it completely out in a map where you map basically every sound is better avoided


Albinus
Creator
20 days ago

i somehow missed this entirely xd

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Issue
Hekireki
Ranking Supervisor
20 days ago

should be a jump


Albinus
Creator
20 days ago

i refuse to add mini jacks, it would make the map worse

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Suggestion
Hekireki
Ranking Supervisor
20 days ago

make this a col1,4 jump and rearrange the surrounding patterning cuz rn the left hand is quite clustured


Albinus
Creator
20 days ago

rearranged the part to be a mix between both hands

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Issue
Hekireki
Ranking Supervisor
20 days ago

ln is late by 1/4

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Issue
Hekireki
Ranking Supervisor
20 days ago

guitar is offeat should be on 1/6 later

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Hekireki
Ranking Supervisor
20 days ago

dont quite understasnd your chord sizing in section 192241-209696 so if you could clarify
like why arent 194695|1,194832|2 a jump although it has guitar or the two guitar strokes for 193604|4,193604|2,193741|1 not both jumps or singles cuz they sound the same to me. or are u mapping these to cymbals drums lyrics.


Albinus
Creator
20 days ago

in that section for guitars i focus on the lead guitar that gives like accents to the guitar melody, i ignore base guitars, because i dont feel they give much in terms of rhythm or melody.
For rhythm aspect focus is on the drums the more audible and impactful kick streams and cymbals and the occasional hand for loud snare and in terms of melody the focus is on the lead guitar giving the accented hands.

So in short, the section works likes this, if there is no snare drum - focus on the key sound coming from the lead guitar, if there is a snare drum - focus on the drum part and ignore the lead guitar

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Suggestion
Hekireki
Ranking Supervisor
20 days ago

would change the direction of this hand cuz the pitch changes compared to 163877|2,163877|1,163877|4,164423|4,164423|1,164423|2,164968|4,164968|1,164968|2 (also why is the only symmetrical chord progression you have for this sound compared to everywhere else where it changes by secondary guitar pitch im presuming


Albinus
Creator
20 days ago

changed the hand there, to be honest, i dont focus that much on the pitches of sounds, i mainly just focus on rhythm and the intensity of sounds and instruments for them, thats why practically all of my maps dont have a consistent structure based on pitch but in terms of just note pattern structure, like at which sound is a hand pattern, a jack pattern and so on, so its just an elevated level of mapping to follow the pitch of sounds, im more of a basic rhythm mapper, i focus on easily noticeable and audible sounds and place a pattern accordingly, but i will always live by a rule, if its possible to not have a mini jacks ever in map, unless im forced to by ln + streams

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Hekireki
Ranking Supervisor
20 days ago

to shorten this ln and make 130059 a chord, tho if its esthetitically displeasing to you ignore


Albinus
Creator
20 days ago

my main focus in these sections is on the melody from guitars, so i focus on keeping the ln full length and less of a focus on drums in this part

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Hekireki
Ranking Supervisor
20 days ago

would move one note of the quad down here cuz the vocal starts here accompanied by a drum


Albinus
Creator
20 days ago

for me this would be super awkward and would feel out of place rhythmically

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Issue
Hekireki
Ranking Supervisor
20 days ago

missing note

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Issue
Hekireki
Ranking Supervisor
20 days ago

since you added minor hits like 53150|3
there is a quiet cymbal/drum at 52878, 53559,62014,


Hekireki
Ranking Supervisor
20 days ago

same at 158150

Hekireki
Ranking Supervisor
20 days ago

same at 170150