literally the only instance in this section where you emphasize vocal here with LN , might as well remove it, not to mention you dont do this for the other sections
accepted for the bass kick, not for the snare, since the snares here are represented with jumps, I decided to keep that for consistency, as for the bass kick, I decided to turn the ones without the extra "punch" from another kick a jump instead of a hand, kinda just nerfing the entire section for the better
should be same chord arrangement considering 22542|3,22542|4,22696|3,22696|4,22849|2,22849|1,23003|1,23003|2 24998|1,24998|4,25151|1,25151|4,25304|3,25304|2,25458|3,25458|2 etc. i dont see that much justification based on the vocal context
I didn't move 31442|2 to column 1 cuz I didn't really want to make a 3 note jack, considering these notes 31135|1,31289|1, also I don't think 31442|3 belongs on column for cuz the jump after that represents a different pitch in the vocal melody.
22542|3,22542|4,22696|3,22696|4,22849|2,22849|1,23003|1,23003|2 these jumps are placed to a i-i-ii-ii melody part, same for the second one you mentioned, this one has a i-i-i-ii melody part
32363|4,32363|1,32516|4,32516|1,32670|3,32670|4,32823|2,32823|1 similar to this bit too, i-i-i-ii melody part, jump no.3 is a different jack (3 note jack for only one column and not for the other), and jump no.4 is a different one
literally the only instance in this section where you emphasize vocal here with LN , might as well remove it, not to mention you dont do this for the other sections
single cus same sound as 127750|3,127828|1,127828|4,127906|3,127906|2
130170|1,130248|3 vocal was a bit early so I placed an extra note
too repetitive and makes right hand bias
could make this a single for contrast to the more distinct syllable vocals cus this one just sounds very blended in
ykw yeah
should be double for snare
it's already a double lol
is much more intense than 73794|1,73794|3,73794|4 imo, the snare should be triple and the bass kick should be double
accepted for the bass kick, not for the snare, since the snares here are represented with jumps, I decided to keep that for consistency, as for the bass kick, I decided to turn the ones without the extra "punch" from another kick a jump instead of a hand, kinda just nerfing the entire section for the better
should be same chord arrangement considering 22542|3,22542|4,22696|3,22696|4,22849|2,22849|1,23003|1,23003|2 24998|1,24998|4,25151|1,25151|4,25304|3,25304|2,25458|3,25458|2 etc. i dont see that much justification based on the vocal context
I didn't move 31442|2 to column 1 cuz I didn't really want to make a 3 note jack, considering these notes 31135|1,31289|1, also I don't think 31442|3 belongs on column for cuz the jump after that represents a different pitch in the vocal melody.
22542|3,22542|4,22696|3,22696|4,22849|2,22849|1,23003|1,23003|2 these jumps are placed to a i-i-ii-ii melody part, same for the second one you mentioned, this one has a i-i-i-ii melody part
32363|4,32363|1,32516|4,32516|1,32670|3,32670|4,32823|2,32823|1 similar to this bit too, i-i-i-ii melody part, jump no.3 is a different jack (3 note jack for only one column and not for the other), and jump no.4 is a different one
u make this jack but not 24691|4,24844|2 ? for consistency sake it should be one or the other
25918|3,25918|1,26072|2 here as well
too much right hand, could make 22235|3 to col 1